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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ It was the year two thousand eighty-five when we boarded Starship Sator Arepo. Astronauts are we, seeking adventures in the cosmic seas while looking for rogue planets beyond the Milky Way. 3... 2... 1...Liftoff! We hurled through space at the cosmic speed limit traveling light years beyond our galaxy. On day 35 it happened—a sea of stardust, then a spark, then nothing but black emptiness. We drifted aimlessly in the darkness, slowly suspecting the space we’re traveling in is of a different sort from what we thought whenever the word “space” was decked out by our fantasies back on Earth. For decades we wandered about in the inky crepuscle surmising our drift was even deeper than we first believed, that knowledge is a blue naiveté which we determined with a measured quantity of perceptivity. We now suspect that what we claim is space and glassy clarity around Arepo’s hull is not a black hole; it’s spirit, everlasting and impalpable. We have strayed into spiritual seas. I look out the cockpit window into the black nothingness. Suddenly, there is a spark. Then a sea of stardust. And the universe begins again.

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Date: 1/26/2024 2:14:00 AM
More than half of my books deal with SF. My favourite author is Isaac Asimov and I have all his books. Pity he died. The last of his series, Foundation and Earth, left us in the lurch. Would I have met Gaia! Your poem is great and I loved its imagery. Very original.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/26/2024 5:42:00 AM
My hubby is a sci-fi reader...His favorite is Orson Scott Cord. We've both read most of his works. Read Asimov when in college. Thanks for your enthusiastic response and kindness...enjoy your day, Sara
Date: 1/25/2024 5:42:00 PM
A brilliant poem, Sara. To wander into the unknown to realize that perhaps you have crossed into Heaven. Very Twilight Zone.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/26/2024 5:43:00 AM
thank you, Jerry! Appreciate your words...the Twilight Zone effect was what I was going for...grateful you sensed that. enjoy your day, Sara
Date: 1/25/2024 5:29:00 PM
I like the concept of "spiritual seas", it definitely takes this write to a higher level, no pun intended
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/26/2024 5:44:00 AM
I appreciate your comment, Joseph...clever non-pun words :-) smiles, Sara
Date: 1/25/2024 1:02:00 PM
Very sci fi. I have not posted mine yet, but it's also about space travel, just very different from yours. I bet the sponsor will really love this.
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/25/2024 4:05:00 PM
thanks for your visit and for your kind words, Andrea. Looking forward to reading your sci-fi poem....was a bit of a challenge for me...thanks for your encouragement...have a pleasant evening, Sara
Date: 1/25/2024 12:03:00 PM
Wow this is excellent and gives me an idea on how to writ for this genre and theme too: the way you’ve written is so intriguing and so creative dear sara with such an imaginative vision flowing in such a seamless manner: I especially loved the lines “ For decades we wandered about in the inky crepuscle surmising our drift was even deeper than we first believed, that knowledge is a blue naiveté“ whoa! So much depth in that: is this your first time writing something like this? Youv nailed it! BOL
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/25/2024 4:07:00 PM
thanks from the bottom of my heart, dearest Ink, for your kind words about my sci-fi poem. This was my first sci-fi attempt--struggled a bit with it, but you've encouraged me and my efforts. Color me grateful...Best of luck writing yours...hugs, Sara
Date: 1/25/2024 11:55:00 AM
My dear friend Sara, you storytelling poem is a compelling exploration of space, consciousness, and the boundaries of human understanding. Its lyrical prose and profound insights invite readers on a transcendent journey of exploration and introspection, where the mysteries of the universe unfold in poetic splendour... Best of luck in the contest..
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/25/2024 4:08:00 PM
thank you for your in-depth response, Silent One. You nailed the themes I intended. Grateful you saw those. Appreciate you and your visit, Sara
Date: 1/25/2024 6:52:00 AM
Dear Sara, your "Starship" took me on a mind-bending voyage! The hunt for rogue planets gives way to an exquisite existential twist – the cosmos as a spiritual ocean, and our bold "space" mere naiveté. I love the line "knowledge is a blue naiveté," such a thought image for the humbling vastness of the unknown. Your poem leaves me pondering the frontiers of science and spirit, yearning to know what lies beyond the black. Bravo for a stellar exploration! - Blessings, Daniel
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/25/2024 4:09:00 PM
awww, thank you, Daniel, for your enthusiastic and encouraging comments. I'm glad you found the poem a bit mind bending with the intertwining of the scientific with the spiritual. Thanks for the bravo! Have a blessed evening, Sara
Date: 1/25/2024 6:23:00 AM
Your poem is about the transformative and enlightening journey of astronauts aboard the Starship Sator Arepo as they navigate through the cosmic seas and encounter the spiritual and profound nature of space, dear Sara. The word choice in the poem is rich and evocative, creating a sense of wonder and awe. You use imagery such as "sea of stardust," "black emptiness," and "inky crepuscle" to convey the vastness and mystery of space. Good luck with the contest
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/25/2024 4:13:00 PM
thanks, kind Sotto, for your visit and your in-depth read of my poem. It is my first sci-fi poem attempt. The original was much longer but had to cut it down to 20 lines to follow the contest guides...I'm glad you appreciated my work, the imagery, and the intertwing of the mystery of both space and the spiritual world. Have a great evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
Date: 1/25/2024 5:57:00 AM
Creative and imaginative work you have penned. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Way to go. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Sara K
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/25/2024 4:11:00 PM
thanks Sara K for visiting and for your positive comments. Fingers crossed on the contest. Hugs, Sara
Date: 1/25/2024 5:49:00 AM
Gosh this is so good. It makes the reader want more. I'll bet this would be awesome fleshed out into a full story
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Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 1/25/2024 4:10:00 PM
thanks for the read and your comments, Tom. Actually, the original poem was much longer--had to cut it down to the 20 line maximum and hoped I didn't lose too much in the cutting. Have a great evening, Sara

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