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Stars That Form Intimacy

May the stars form intimacy We believe the dreams they create Their sincere glow will become ours Sparkles of ecstasy
Russell Sivey Modified Dodoistsu 8/8/8/6 Instead of Traditional 7/7/7/5

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/25/2012 8:58:00 PM
An interesting idea, stars forming intimacy by creating dreams and glow!!
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Date: 6/24/2012 4:19:00 PM
Russell, your modified Dodoistsu, was amazing to read... very sensual... love the passion... thanks for sharing your poem, always~PD
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Date: 6/24/2012 11:31:00 AM
lovely write, Russell - and a clever new form of dodoitsu too
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Date: 6/24/2012 6:55:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your creative and descriptive work this morn..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments are always uplifting..Sara
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Date: 6/24/2012 6:37:00 AM
It has been a pleasure to read such a wonderful poem!! Lori
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Date: 6/24/2012 12:51:00 AM
Wonderful write by you Russell.Love it!
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Date: 6/23/2012 10:11:00 PM
sparkles of ecstacy , great finish ...great poetry...good-oh mate
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