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Stars of clarity

Stars of clarity are a rarity for our clouded mind, not quite love aligned. Yet rising each morn, before thoughts are born, with no to-do lists, we’re drenched in bliss mists. Ego vaporised, nothing weighed or sized, so we feel complete, joyous head to feet. Moments such as this, which fill us with bliss, finds our heart aglow, in staid stillness slow. Head-heart stand apart, so that's where we start, journey of our soul, that we may feel whole. In time, thoughts do stir but with love concur, since we hold onto, bliss beats that renew. In this benign storm, pervading our form, we see our soul's light, as clear as daylight. One with boundless space, in the void we trace, soul’s imprint distinct, which is now love inked. In heavenly heights, light that lights all lights, pure divine essence, is our quintessence. Nothing need be done; God and we are one. Simple is the truth; get to it forsooth.

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Date: 12/5/2023 5:19:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely write again. Have a wonderful day with your win...............
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Date: 12/5/2023 6:29:00 AM
Thank you, dear Paula
Date: 12/4/2023 6:26:00 AM
A very deep and meaningful write, ive never tried this form before but I absolutely love how it gives a catchy cadence to the profound words you’ve woven here, thank you for sharing dear seeker, congratulations on your win
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Date: 12/4/2023 8:38:00 AM
Yes, this compact form generates a great/rhythm automatically ~ thank you for the placement and for hosting, IE, big effort
Date: 11/29/2023 9:57:00 AM
Nice poem,
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Date: 12/4/2023 8:37:00 AM
Thank you, Jay
Date: 11/22/2023 8:09:00 AM
WOW!!! What a lovely write. Good Luck... Guess I need to learn about the Jueju style. You made it look so easy/beautiful. Looks like we both did this one. Have a wonderful day writing away.............
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Date: 11/22/2023 5:48:00 PM
Thank you, Paula. I like the Jueju and other rhyming styles. The sponsor indicated a preference for free verse though.
Date: 11/21/2023 9:36:00 PM
A masterly insight into the depth of the inner self beautifully delivered with beams of clarity in a flowing rhythm and style. Best regards. KG
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Date: 11/21/2023 10:27:00 PM
Thank you, dear KG.

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