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Stars of Clarity

Stars of Clarity As I threw a pebble into a pool, and watched the ripples spread, I saw you on a fruitful desert oasis. The confused image my mind imagined, a nighttime guidance of hope in a dream. Enlightenment etched in memory, draped in orange honey silk veil stars. Whilst gracefully a gentle breeze caress slowly lifting the veil in the air, floating, as it wanting to dance. A vision of leaves fumbling as I reach out. The reflection in the pool does vanish, circling, adrift to the edge illuminating a path of a breathtaking fantasy. 11/21/2023

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/22/2023 7:15:00 PM

Surreal and beautiful, Eve

Judy Ball

Date: 11/22/2023 12:24:00 PM

Beautiful Eve. Wonderful imagery with a soft warm feel to it. God Bless, JB

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/22/2023 8:21:00 AM

A lovely "Stars of Clarity" write. Good Luck... We both did this one. Have a wonderful day writing away.............

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/22/2023 5:31:00 AM

Your poem's mood and rhythm were extremely lovely, yielding an intense feeling of dedication. Dear Eve, your lovely words readily evoked fond memories.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/22/2023 5:16:00 AM

Filled with heartfelt emotions your tender write brings forth beloved memories, Eve. Much enjoyed the tone and flow of your poem.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/22/2023 4:48:00 AM

Ahhh!! Very emotive and expressive work. Keep on being creative. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. I hope your Thanksgiving is going to be all you could want. Sara K

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/22/2023 3:47:00 AM

a surreal but breathtaking poem, Eve. I loved these lines: Enlightenment etched in memory, draped in orange honey silk veil stars." They spoke to me. Best wishes with the contest, Happy Thanksgiving, Sara