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Stars Are Out Tonight

Stars are out tonight-- more accurately I am out tonight to greet them, the cozier side of me, my evening thoughts far more at ease in dimmer light-- the pavement of my steps less rowdy for the clutter abating with heels of high and soles of tap relaxing to slippers; (the daily pace diminished but not somber—as those needed rests of a theater score; I evacuate--having survived a jittery line with nervous anticipation--) To say they are eyes and not the eyes of others, seeing not the worlds and their journeys is to forget the past and deny the future where we may all yet greet, some unimaginable place… one could never count them all, you know—for one thing, they never stay in any place long enough: like people we love treasured ones becoming wrinkled and feeble like evolution-- in fact, to try and hold on to any precious moment or period in time, is like trying to guess a woman’s age before the shades are drawn when honesty begins….

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Date: 1/26/2020 3:45:00 PM
What a eye sees inspires how we feel... Great poem Joe..
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/26/2020 7:34:00 PM
For sure; what we see and hear go into our DNA same as physical nourishment.
Date: 1/24/2020 8:27:00 AM
I love how you start this poem - Stars are out tonight-- more accurately I am out tonight to greet them. So true! We get to enjoy a moment only once and then its gone, not from mind thankfully but from accuracy except in the world that lives in our heads.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/24/2020 6:38:00 PM
Mind is more important to me, don't you thing? That's what we take with us when we leave this earth. Thank you so much. So pleased that you like this one.
Date: 1/23/2020 12:55:00 PM
" when honesty begins..."...in the desires of Spring. I like how you expressed it...
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/23/2020 4:40:00 PM
Hi Arturo; so pleased you like this one. Have a great day!
Date: 1/23/2020 11:26:00 AM
Joe,your poem makes stars seem even more magical and lifelong.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/23/2020 11:30:00 AM
Thank you so much, Caren: Like your own fine poetry, from the heart of eternal beauty.

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