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Stars Are Out Tonight

Stars are out tonight--
more accurately
I am out tonight
to greet them, the
cozier side of me,
my evening thoughts
far more at ease
in dimmer light--

the pavement of my
steps less rowdy

for the clutter abating

with heels of high
and soles of tap
relaxing to slippers; 

(the daily pace diminished
but not somber—as those
needed rests of a theater score;

I evacuate--having 
survived a jittery line 
with nervous anticipation--)

To say they are eyes
and not the eyes of others,
seeing not the worlds
and their journeys
is to forget the past
and deny the future
where we may all 
yet greet, some unimaginable
place…

one could never count them
all, you know—for one thing, 
they never stay in any place 
long enough:
like people we love
treasured ones 
becoming wrinkled
and feeble
like evolution--
in fact, to try
and hold on to any precious
moment or period
in time, is like trying to
guess a woman’s age
before the shades are drawn
when honesty begins….

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 1/26/2020 3:45:00 PM
What a eye sees inspires how we feel... Great poem Joe..
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/26/2020 7:34:00 PM
For sure; what we see and hear go into our DNA same as physical nourishment.
Date: 1/24/2020 8:27:00 AM
I love how you start this poem - Stars are out tonight-- more accurately I am out tonight to greet them. So true! We get to enjoy a moment only once and then its gone, not from mind thankfully but from accuracy except in the world that lives in our heads.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/24/2020 6:38:00 PM
Mind is more important to me, don't you thing? That's what we take with us when we leave this earth. Thank you so much. So pleased that you like this one.
Date: 1/23/2020 12:55:00 PM
" when honesty begins..."...in the desires of Spring. I like how you expressed it...
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/23/2020 4:40:00 PM
Hi Arturo; so pleased you like this one. Have a great day!
Date: 1/23/2020 11:26:00 AM
Joe,your poem makes stars seem even more magical and lifelong.
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Joe Dimino
Date: 1/23/2020 11:30:00 AM
Thank you so much, Caren: Like your own fine poetry, from the heart of eternal beauty.

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