Stars

Stars

                                                 STARS
                                                Sparkle
                                               Crystal fire

                                      Warm summer evenings
                                     Waiting for the  first  star
                                    Wishes twinkle like starlight

                              "Stars shepherd our unspoken dreams."

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 8/21/2025 11:23:00 PM

What a lovely piece Sam!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/21/2025 1:40:00 PM

Creative lines penned. There must be a contest because I have seen a couple of similar ones. This one reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/20/2025 11:58:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Stars" write. Great last line here. I love the pretty stars. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a fun day writing away..........

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/20/2025 3:06:00 AM

Your path through the gentle rhythms of this heartfelt and fanciful poem, dear Sam, brings me excitement untold. As I wandered through the lines of your poem, a soft wave cradled my soul, as though I floated upon a tranquil stream. Softly spun with care, a beauty that captures the soul. The last line carries a whisper of charm. A fave for me

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/20/2025 11:32:00 AM

Dearest Lasaad, your beautiful feedback leaves me as breathless as finding a new star or discovering a new constellation. Stargazing and waiting for the first star is indeed an experience of tranquility and hope. I am so honored by your fave!!! Thank you for that special honor. Have to admit I wrote several pyramid poems but this one kept calling to me. I love to stargaze and still send wishes on the first star! Thank you for sharing in this experience of magic and childlike wonder. Blessings to you, dear friend!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/20/2025 2:15:00 AM

simply beautiful

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/20/2025 11:26:00 AM

Thank you so much Arthur! I was hoping to capture the beauty of a starry sky and the wonder of wishing on a star! Blessings to you!

Paige Hind

Date: 8/19/2025 6:11:00 PM

A lovely poem about Stars!! :) <3

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/20/2025 11:24:00 AM

Hi Paige! Thank you! Stargazing is truly a magical experience! Blessings to you!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 8/19/2025 5:16:00 PM

I felt as if I was floating as I read your poem. Softly and beautifully crafted and captivating. hugs, Sara

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/20/2025 11:13:00 AM

Hi Sara! What a beautiful message - to float among the stars on a warm summer's eve! After writing several pyramid poems, thinking about the magical experience of stargazing won out! So happy these words took you into the stars. Hugs and blessings, my friend!

Bill Baker

Date: 8/19/2025 3:06:00 PM

I love the way you progressed with the syllables in this creative and gentle poem, Sam. Your last line was comforting. Smiles ~ Blessings, my friend. Bill

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/20/2025 11:07:00 AM

Hi Bill! Thank you. Writing this poem made me remember all of those warm summer nights, laying on the lawn stargazing sending wishes into the night. It is a precious memory and so much fun to remember those experiences writing this poem. Sending back to you blessings and big smiles, my Lone Star friend!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/19/2025 1:13:00 PM

wow, the last line is amazing. The whole thing was so nice. Wish I had thought up a pretty one instead of doing Mud. haha

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/20/2025 11:58:00 AM

thanks, Sam

Sam Kauffman
Date: 8/19/2025 2:02:00 PM

Hi there! Thank you! I wrote four or five before settling on Stars. This was a fun challenge. And, I love your MUD - especially your last line. I think all of us can remember fashioning mud pies! Great conclusion. Blessings!