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STARS my love dream my queen moon is mischievous with passionate amour milky way seems very shy "romance blossoms with stars and moon" Pyramids Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May 13 /09/2020

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Jack Horne

Date: 10/29/2020 1:25:00 PM

this is just gorgeous

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/30/2020 4:28:00 AM

Thank-you Jack, you are such a gentleman, love your comments. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/26/2020 4:33:00 PM

Oh, this is so very lush and lovely, Jennifer. The sexy drama in the night skies is beautifully expressed. Your imagery and personification is dreamy and romantic... and what is romance if not a bit mischievous? ;) Warmest wishes, my talented friend.. ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/16/2020 5:03:00 PM

Hello my dear poetry friend, I'm humbled by your generous compliment. Your pen shines exquisitely, Jennifer, and your heart shines so exquisitely too.. I'm sorry to say that I haven't seen nor heard from our wonderful friend, Winged Warrior. I've sent several soup mails to him but have not heard back. There are a few of us looking for him. WW and I call each other 'sis and bro' but we're not related by blood, but rather, we are related by poetry. I hope we hear from him soon.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/3/2020 7:34:00 AM

Absolutely Susan must peek and arouse the readers a little - hope you are well and do you perhaps know if Winged Warrior or Wingster as I called him in my super heroes poems is OK always thought you were related but perhaps i'm wrong and I am concerned. You are the talented poetess Susan, without a shadow of a doubt. All my love and blessings, Jennifer.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 9/22/2020 1:39:00 PM

Very nice, congrat's on your placement!

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/21/2020 9:20:00 AM

Thank-you MLK - hope you are keeping safe and well. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/22/2020 12:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I love the night with its many stares and moon along with this wonderful poem. I love you line, "romance blossoms with stars and moon." Enjoy your win...................

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/21/2020 9:23:00 AM

Thank-you Paula, you are such a kind friend and fellow poetess on soup, thank-you for your support and awesome comments when answering my poems, just catching up and will soon be visiting you. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Judy Ball

Date: 9/22/2020 8:21:00 AM

To me the stars have always looked like designs made in diamonds on black velvet. Well done Jennifer. Congrats on a fine win. God Bless, JB

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/21/2020 9:26:00 AM

Thank-you Judy, you describe the stars like diamonds on black velvet, that is wonderful imagery. Thank you for your kind wishes, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/21/2020 4:36:00 PM

Hello Jennifer ... congratulations. You deserve all the recognition you get - catch you soon Jennifer - Lindsay

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/21/2020 9:27:00 AM

Thank-you Lindsay, that is a very kind comment to make, my friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/21/2020 8:42:00 AM

your heart is aflame, jen...sweet congrats on your fine win!...huggs

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 10/21/2020 9:29:00 AM

Sweet congrats from a sweet poetess, thank you Nette, Hugs and blessings Jennifer.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2020 1:52:00 PM

a Celestial romance!! AWesome, Jennifer and congrats on the win.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/21/2020 6:17:00 AM

Thank you Andrea and congrats to you also for you wonderful 1st place. Well done, Blessings, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/20/2020 12:10:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win, dear Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/21/2020 6:16:00 AM

Thank-you Sunshine Smile, my dear friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Joseph May

Date: 9/20/2020 11:57:00 AM

Beautiful write Jennifer, Congrats on your win..

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/21/2020 6:13:00 AM

Thank-you Joseph for my 2nd place win in you contest, it was fun, I'm glad you enjoyed it and hope you are keeping well. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 9/20/2020 11:56:00 AM

Congrats on your win Jennifer. Hugs!

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/21/2020 6:14:00 AM

Paghunda, you are such a sweetheart - thank-you. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 9/20/2020 6:22:00 AM

Yes, the things that are not noticed much anymore. Our light pollution, smog, and haze makes the milky way invisible to most...and to think it was entertainment in the time of Greek society, and it is fun to watch if one has patience to see it and is willing to spend some time with it.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/21/2020 6:24:00 AM

Duke, what a surprise, a very pleasant one, how are you, hope you are keeping well! When we are at the Kruger National Park, the sky is totally clear at night. We can see constellations and the milk way. Keep well my friend and thank you so much for an awesome comment. Blessings Duke, Jennifer.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/20/2020 4:11:00 AM

Creative work for the contest. Way to go. I appreciate all the visits to my page. Your time spent there is appreciated. Sara

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/21/2020 6:26:00 AM

Thank-you Sara for a fine comment, - always a pleasure visiting your page, you write beautifully. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 9/18/2020 1:07:00 PM

Awesome Jennifer! You penned it very well. Good luck for the contest.

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/21/2020 6:32:00 AM

Thanks Pagunda, you are a great poet to have in our midst. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Mark Koplin

Date: 9/16/2020 6:41:00 PM

Very well done Jennifer! A beautifully written pyramid

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/21/2020 6:34:00 AM

Hi Mark, hope you are well my friend and thank you for a great comment. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Jack Horne

Date: 9/16/2020 11:23:00 AM

love this clever fun write

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/21/2020 6:41:00 AM

Thank-you Jack, I really appreciate and enjoy you visiting and your comments. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

John Watt

Date: 9/15/2020 11:31:00 AM

Jenny, I love the direction you went with this form, and the personification of the celestial beings as shy and mischievous. A nice romantic write with plenty of night sky mystique sprinkled in. Best wishes in the contest, my friend. Hugs ~ John

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/21/2020 6:39:00 AM

Thank-you John, a little bit of shyness and a little bit of mischievousness makes for a mystical romance - you are right, the sky does look like it is sprinkled - looks like sparkle dust on a clear night. Lovely comment John, Blessings and hugs Jenny.

Judy Ball

Date: 9/14/2020 6:05:00 AM

Beautiful Jennifer. So dreamy. Nice job. God Bless, JB

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/21/2020 6:31:00 AM

Thanks Judy, I always enjoy Joseph's contests - such fun. Blessings and hugs Jennifer.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/13/2020 9:24:00 PM

Oh the poor bashful Milky Way, overshadowed by the sultry moon, also love the idea of dreaming stars, very sensual write, Jennifer!

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/21/2020 6:30:00 AM

Thanks Michelle -unfortunately because of city pollution, the Milky Way is becoming more and more bashful, rarely if ever shows himself, only far out in the countryside. Thank you for a fine comment my friend, Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 9/13/2020 1:46:00 PM

Nice one Jenny, there's something about the stars! Hope all is good with you, Blessings always,Gordon

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/21/2020 6:20:00 AM

Pollution covers the stars normally, you have to be far out of any big city to see them but when you do, what a treat! All well here, thank-you Gordon. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 9/13/2020 8:54:00 AM

oh, the moon is soooo mischievous! love this to the moon and back. :D

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/21/2020 6:18:00 AM

Hi Jeanne - enjoyed your comment, thank you for commenting, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/13/2020 8:09:00 AM

- A lovely poem, Jenny :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/20/2020 7:03:00 AM

Thanks my Sunshine Smile, and thank you always for your support. Blessings and hugs my friend. Jenny.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/13/2020 7:46:00 AM

Lovely pyramid. Stars are awesome in the depth of the night. ~~

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/13/2020 10:54:00 AM

They really are Victor, and very romantic if it is a clear cloudless sky. I will be visiting you poems tomorrow. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/13/2020 7:33:00 AM

Very nice Jennifer. I like the moon is mischievous and romance blossoms :)

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 9/13/2020 10:52:00 AM

Thank-you Heidi, a lovely comment, hope you are feeling better. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.