Pensive

pensive sultry night stargazing AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on April 28, 2018

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Niall Fulham

Date: 4/29/2018 12:30:00 PM

Hi Line, I love a good starry night:)well penned my friend::)))Hugs~~Niall

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2018 1:33:00 PM

thanks, Niall. Much appreciated.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/29/2018 8:50:00 AM

So evocative in so few words - very tricky to do, this moved me - take care, Line-

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2018 9:57:00 AM

Thank you, Michelle. Most appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/29/2018 5:12:00 AM

I love watching the sky, morning, noon and night. This sweet haiku reminded me to get out there! I like it a bunch.

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/29/2018 7:11:00 AM

Thanks, Caren. There is something absolutely therapeutic about being out in nature.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/28/2018 6:11:00 PM

Love seeing you in this pensive mood. You are writing a lot. I think I will just try keeping up with you new poems for now. I sure have lots of challenges to try!!

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/28/2018 6:24:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit, Andrea. Much appreciated.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 4/28/2018 4:10:00 PM

Lovely haiku with lots of imagery! I am a stargazer and the cosmos really excite me; so I can definitely identify with this beautiful piece! Well done, my friend! Hugs. Pandita

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/28/2018 5:37:00 PM

Thank you , Pandita. Most appreciated.