Pensive

pensive
sultry night
stargazing



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

imaginationinspirationintrospectionskysolitudesenryu

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Michelle Faulkner

April 29, 2018 at 8:50 AM

So evocative in so few words - very tricky to do, this moved me - take care, Line-

Line Gauthier

April 29, 2018 at 9:57 AM

Thank you, Michelle. Most appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger

April 29, 2018 at 5:12 AM

I love watching the sky, morning, noon and night. This sweet haiku reminded me to get out there! I like it a bunch.

Line Gauthier

April 29, 2018 at 7:11 AM

Thanks, Caren. There is something absolutely therapeutic about being out in nature.

Andrea Dietrich

April 28, 2018 at 6:11 PM

Love seeing you in this pensive mood. You are writing a lot. I think I will just try keeping up with you new poems for now. I sure have lots of challenges to try!!

Line Gauthier

April 28, 2018 at 6:24 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit, Andrea. Much appreciated.

Pandita Sietesantos

April 28, 2018 at 4:10 PM

Lovely haiku with lots of imagery! I am a stargazer and the cosmos really excite me; so I can definitely identify with this beautiful piece! Well done, my friend! Hugs. Pandita

Line Gauthier

April 28, 2018 at 5:37 PM

Thank you , Pandita. Most appreciated.

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