Starlight Ballet-dodo

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Starlight

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Poem written and submitted for "Vo dee oh doe" Poetry Contest 4/14/2024

Kim Rodriguez, Sponsor

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ moon in romantic roll-play dancing his poetic waltz vo dee oh doe, vo dee doe ballet in starlight

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Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 4/15/2024 1:55:00 PM

Delightful read!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/15/2024 5:46:00 PM

thank you...grateful for your visits and support today. Have a wonderful evening, Sara

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/15/2024 11:41:00 AM

I thoroughly appreciated your charming, lyrical poem, Sara. Dance under the starry night sky--truly enchanting!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/15/2024 5:46:00 PM

thank you for visiting and for dancing with the stars in my poem :-) Stars are enchanting, aren't they? have a splendid evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara

Vijay Pandit

Date: 4/15/2024 5:37:00 AM

Much enjoyed your delightful, waltzing poem, Sara. Ballet in starlight--indeed!

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/15/2024 5:45:00 PM

awww, thanks! Your comments are a joy to read.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/15/2024 2:01:00 AM

You did well with the idea of Kim's contest which frankly I cannot understand.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/15/2024 4:28:00 AM

thanks for your encouraging words, Victor. To be honest, I struggled a bit with what to do for this contest. Still not 100% sure :-) We'll see. Liked the challenge. Have a splendid Monday, Sara

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 4/14/2024 9:28:00 PM

Poem gives a romantic image. The moon does move across the sky (or do we?) A waltz gives the ambience of the night. Thanks for your serene words.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 4/15/2024 4:27:00 AM

hmmm...interesting thought...do we move rather than the moon moving? I like the way your mind thinks. Thanks for stopping by, hugs, Sara