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Stargazer lily, I always catch my breath as I watch you dancing in your pretty pink party dress twirling and swirling on a sultry summer breeze lovely lily I truly adore your exotic fragrance, so sweet and alluring. how you blush bright pink as the sun shines on your pretty face and the way those cute freckles appear on your skin. Every year I look forward to your return Knowing how you’ll grace my garden with beauty and fabulous fragrance Favorite Scent(s) Poetry Contest Sponsored by Chantelle Anne Cooke 03/26/21

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/5/2021 12:52:00 PM

- Congratulations, Jan :)

Garima Dubey

Date: 4/1/2021 10:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Jan.This is such a lovely and beautiful poem.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 4/1/2021 5:40:00 PM

Congratulations Jan on a truly deserved win with your lovely Lily the Pink poem. Hugs, Belle :-) xx

Marilene Evans

Date: 4/1/2021 4:31:00 PM

Oh, so beautifully penned.... Congratulations.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/1/2021 4:52:00 PM

Thanks Marilene:-) hugs Jan xx

Juliet Ligon

Date: 4/1/2021 4:16:00 PM

I love how you personified the lily with a pink blush and cute freckles. I can imagine her fragrance swaying in the breeze. Congratulations!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/1/2021 4:52:00 PM

Thanks Juliet they are such glorious flowers:-) hugs Jan xx

Ken Rone

Date: 3/31/2021 8:26:00 AM

Your themes involving the coming of spring are a delight...at a time I need it most. Thank you Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/1/2021 4:51:00 PM

Thanks Ken:-) hugs Jan xx

Judy Ball

Date: 3/28/2021 7:17:00 PM

Love this Jan. I have lots of lilies in my garden and look forward to them every year. Nice job. God Bless, JB

Jan Allison
Date: 4/1/2021 4:51:00 PM

Thanks Judy I adore the pink colour and the scent is so alluring:-) hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/28/2021 2:23:00 AM

Don't think I've seen lilies in this pretty bright pink color, but love your description of them. It does look like they have "cute freckles." Great entry for the contest, Jan. Best wishes for a win! Hugs, Carolyn

Jan Allison
Date: 4/1/2021 4:50:00 PM

Thanks Carolyn they are truly stunning:-) hugs Jan xx

Mark Koplin

Date: 3/27/2021 2:10:00 PM

What a wonderful description Jan!!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/1/2021 4:50:00 PM

Thanks Mark:-) hugs Jan xx

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/27/2021 12:19:00 PM

I love stargazer lillies; beautifully crafted pen.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/1/2021 4:49:00 PM

Thanks ML they are so stunning:-) hugs Jan xx

Kaveesha Ruwindi

Date: 3/27/2021 11:54:00 AM

So lovely!!! Hope you're doing good.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/1/2021 4:49:00 PM

Thanks Kaveesha, I'm doing fine thanks hope all is good with you too-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/27/2021 6:53:00 AM

Beautiful, Jan. Loved the allurement of your lines... good luck in the contest

Jan Allison
Date: 4/1/2021 4:49:00 PM

Thanks Eileen its so lovely to see you, hope you and the family are well:-) hugs Jan xx

Alexis Y.

Date: 3/27/2021 2:18:00 AM

Hi Jan, Lilies are beautiful flowers and they smell amazing . The photo works with your well written write. Best wishes in the contest. Well done:-)Alexis

Jan Allison
Date: 4/1/2021 4:48:00 PM

Thanks Alexis-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 3/27/2021 12:18:00 AM

Wow, Jan. What a great poem. Could almost smell that fragrance. Best for a win. xx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/1/2021 4:48:00 PM

Thanks Victor:-) hugs Jan xx

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 3/26/2021 9:11:00 PM

A garden of lilies, sounds so pretty (omg, the captcha is JAN - really!)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/1/2021 4:47:00 PM

Thanks Michelle, I've had some apt captchas too:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/26/2021 5:16:00 PM

Love the freckled face! Nice!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/1/2021 4:47:00 PM

Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/26/2021 5:09:00 PM

Beautiful flowers Jan, bet they smell wonderful in summertime. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 4/1/2021 4:47:00 PM

I adore the lillies Tom they are so stunning:-) hugs Jan xx

Terry Flood

Date: 3/26/2021 4:50:00 PM

Every year you get Stargazer Lilies... I get bloody moles... is there no justice. I like this, Jan. Don’t normally ’get’ free verse but this works for me. Good luck in contest. Terry

Jan Allison
Date: 3/26/2021 5:08:00 PM

Thanks terry, we don't have any moles on the Island not badgers, squirrels or foxes:-) hugs Jan xx I am not sure if its free verse but i didn't know how else to categorise it:-) hugs Jan xx

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/26/2021 4:14:00 PM

Looks like something Chantelle will admire because I do. Good luck in her contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/26/2021 4:44:00 PM

Thanks so much Robert, i absolutely adore these beautiful blooms, they flower in my planters year in year out and the scent is amazing - a friend once described them as 'erotic' when he meant exotic lol:-) hugs jan xx