Stardust

stardust falls and i asleep - my cradle is the crescent moon 4/16/2023

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2023 4:10:00 PM

Very lovely image, Kim. Congrats

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/12/2023 5:53:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea!

Len Gasun

Date: 4/29/2023 8:28:00 PM

Congratulations on your win and for this sweet and charming monoku my dear poet friend Kim! Thanks for sharing. God bless you and your writings. hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2023 8:42:00 PM

Thank you most kindly, Len!

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/29/2023 11:28:00 AM

Congratulations on writing such a beautiful poem that manages to combine the mystique of stardust with the wisdom of thought and the elegance of poetry.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2023 4:29:00 PM

Thank you, dear one!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/29/2023 10:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A pretty write. Sounds like a great night's sleep. Night~night!!! Have a great/blessed weekend.............

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2023 4:29:00 PM

Thank you, Paula! Have a blessed weekend!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/29/2023 9:59:00 AM

What beautiful images Kim! This is like a lullaby of stardust, the moon and sweet slumber! Congratulations on your wonderful win. A beautiful picture of serenity dusted by magic stardust! Blessings.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2023 4:28:00 PM

Thank you for your likewise delightful comment! Blessings!

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/29/2023 6:15:00 AM

Hi Kim, You penned such beautiful imagery in a few words. Congratulations on your 1-place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2023 4:28:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis!