Stardust

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Malabika Ray Choudhury.

splurge of stardust on my dreamy eyes ... fountain of poetry released April 15, 2023 17 syllables - checked by HMS.com Stardust Poetry Contest Sponsor: JCB Brul FIRST PLACE

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2023 4:09:00 PM

wow, I am reading some awesome poetry today on this winner list. Congrats to you.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/30/2023 4:36:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea. Agree with you - the monokus are fabulous!

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/29/2023 11:31:00 AM

Congratulations on writing such a beautiful poem that manages to combine the mystique of stardust with the wisdom of thought and the elegance of poetry.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/29/2023 5:59:00 PM

Dear Poet, I am so delighted to receive your beautiful comment. I am still learning...from all of you - brilliant poets. Really appreciate your visit.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/29/2023 10:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A lovely Monoku write/picture. Now I know how you do it. The stardust has released your wonderful poetry. Have a great/blessed weekend.............

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/29/2023 5:56:00 PM

Dear Paula, Thank you. Now I need to know how you write those magical poems! Hope you are having a great weekend!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/29/2023 9:38:00 AM

Oh, Mala, this twinkles and sparkles with your magic touch, dear friend! I love the word "splurge!" Your wonderful word usage always enhances your writing and brings a touch of magic to each line! Congratulations on your win with this delight! Blessings and hugs dear friend!

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/29/2023 5:54:00 PM

Dear Sam, I am speechless! Your comment is so full of kindness and appreciation - makes my heart sing in delight. I really appreciate you mentioning the word "Splurge" - when I read your poems, i find wonderful choice of words. Love and best wishes ~ Mala

Len Gasun

Date: 4/29/2023 7:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your shining win and this fascinating monoku my dear poet friend Mala. Thank you so much for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/29/2023 5:51:00 PM

Thank you so much, Dear Len. Really appreciate your beautiful comment. God bless you. You have a kind heart, and a gifted pen.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/29/2023 6:12:00 AM

Hi Mala, You created such a dreamy scene in a few words. Congratulations on your 1-place win.It was well deserved . Have a nice day;-) Alexis

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 4/29/2023 5:49:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis. Your comment makes my heart sing!