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Star Wars Vi Return of the Jedi---The Force

Weapon…light-saber Acrobatics with the Force Darth Vader’s demise Entrant into Andrea Dietrich's "SENRYU OF A MOVIE SCENE" contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/2/2012 9:47:00 PM

RUSSELL..READING UP ON SOME OLD CONTEST* CONGRATULATIONS~ WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN! ;-)*always..pd

Tirzah Conway

Date: 1/9/2012 9:47:00 AM

The Force is strong in this one! Congrats on your win!~Tirzah~

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/9/2012 7:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Andrea's "Movie Senryu" contest Russell. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/7/2012 2:20:00 PM

Congratulations on your fine win in the contest, Russell! Enjoyed your senryu! Love, Annalise

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/7/2012 1:47:00 PM

Congrats on your win..Sara

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 1/7/2012 12:27:00 PM

This sure was an action packed entry, Russel! You sure put in the major ingredients here! Congrats on your win!! ;D

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/7/2012 3:23:00 AM

The best villains were always the ones who competed in Olympic gymnastics, right? ha ha. This was a fun lil senryu for me..I already told you about the Star Wars maniac that purchased me a wedding ring??? ha ha. Congrats to you, Russell. Fun one!! Gwendolen

Robert Pettit

Date: 12/28/2011 9:17:00 PM

After reading this, it all comes back to me. Darth Vader was really a good guy all along. The dark side just led him astray. Andrea should like this one because I like it.

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/28/2011 9:19:00 AM

You are venturing on the DARK SIDE, Russell. A very fun write...light sabers and alll....Star Wars is the BIG STUFF in our home...everything Star Wars. I am not an expert as these senryu but I love the content...I have a long way to go in tackling this poetry form..yours seems to have a witty side for sure! ...hope u joined in my Sneezing Limericks contest..Gwendolen

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 12/28/2011 5:04:00 AM

I JUST commented to a family member, " I need to break out the Star Wars DVD Collection! Russell, Thank you for reading and commenting on my stuff. I have been a fan of your writing for a while now. The Holidays has had me away from the Soup...but I will never stop reading the words you put down. Thank you sir....Happy New Year!