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Star of Hope

(My) Star Stars in the sky, shines oh so bright Believin' someone's happy, looking up every night In the middle of nowhere appears that great desire, To touch those stars and light up my life.. Sparklin' yellow, red, white and blue, Changing moods yet never the feelings do Oh my star, if you only knew, How much I would really love to fly just to be with you Star, you're so distant and we're far apart Yet you inspire me to have a better heart That amidst the darkness and serenity of the night.. A greater hope is there despite the little light...

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Date: 4/10/2017 1:33:00 AM
Well done Marjorie, a beautiful first write. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Marjorie Escuadro
Date: 4/10/2017 1:53:00 AM
Thank you Elizabeth.. :)
Date: 4/10/2017 12:26:00 AM
My first poem for poetry soup
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