Star Gazing

I'm mesmerized by star gazing
dreams drifting through the heavens
a traveler through time and space
imagining days of fire and ice

dreams drifting through the heavens
on a summer evening with soft repose
imagining days of fire and ice
the magic of their untold stories

on a summer's evening of soft repose
a traveler through time and space 
the magic of their untold stories
I'm mesmerized with star gazing…
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Martin Avatar
April 17, 2015 at 3:36 PM
Beautiful! Like your imagery and expressions.
La France Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 3:04 PM
Barbara, this is a beautiful Pantoum poem, full of wonderful words and lines, if for a contest best of luck and thanks for your thoughtful comment on my poem, I write poems . . .
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