Star Gazer

These three magic rocks, I hold tight in my hand
Rolling them over, now, what could I plan?
Leave my reality? A new opportunity?
How should I use them? The power they hold...
Can they take me away, as I have been told
To magical places, ...to far-away lands?..

But oh the dilemma, how can I choose?
A place where I could leave all my worries behind?
As I stood there and pondered, under a star filled sky
Searching my heart, to find peace of mind
One star caught my eye, as it dangled so bright...
And I knew....  I must visit the heavens tonight!

Closing my eyes, I made a wish on the stones
In a gust of wind, I was no longer alone
Suddenly appeared was a heavenly tree
Up through the branches were stair steps for me!
I climbed up the limbs, as it reached for the sky
I climbed and clung, as I climbed up so high..

Below the horizon stretched and grew
Till the earth swung free in a tide of blue
Weary and stiff, but fiercely proud
I swung at last to a ledge of a cloud
I sat and I looked at the earth that I know
Then realized the troubles that live down below
When I'd rested enough from my head to crown
I left my soft loft and I climbed the tree down
 
I see things much clearer, from up high in the air
I'm now super-hero who followed a star
In my pocket, the rocks that used to be there
Remind me that children need more than a tear
To look to the sky when their world seems unfair
If their worries come back and a nightmare is there
I'll quickly escort them up heavenly stairs....


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Super-Hero Contest
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Chutani Avatar
October 12, 2014 at 5:04 AM
lovely magical and heroic story. congrats Carrie.
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 10, 2014 at 12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem Carrie.
Yvonne Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 2:09 PM
Excellent, Congratulations on your win.
Allison Avatar
October 9, 2014 at 1:44 PM
wonderful imagery many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Fraser Avatar
November 25, 2009 at 11:08 AM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in Constance's excellent contest >> James,x
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November 23, 2009 at 4:48 PM
congrats on the HM in the contest, wonderful poem!!
Johnson Avatar
November 23, 2009 at 12:29 PM
A lovely poem, but I'm glad you came back to us. lCongratulations on your recognition. Love, Joyce
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November 22, 2009 at 9:22 PM
Congrats, Carrie, on your winning poem in the Magical Journey contest.. well deserved win for a wonderful write... happy to be sharing the same stage with u.. luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
La France Avatar
November 6, 2009 at 10:58 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest..
Sweetheart Avatar
November 6, 2009 at 7:53 AM
Lovely and enchanting poetry and much good luck in the contest.. I am still working on what to write for Constance's contest myself.. when the words do come I hope it will as lovely as yours.. u are always so gracious with your comments and they are much appreciated... thankxxx... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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November 6, 2009 at 7:41 AM
Hi Carrie, I love this one! So dreamy, smile. A magical journey indeed, one I'd love to take anytime. Good luck in contest though I don't think you're going to need it! Thanks for sharing. Love Light Patricia
George   Avatar
November 6, 2009 at 5:38 AM
BEAUTIFUL STORY, CARRIE. A WINNER FOR SURE. THANK YOU FOR SHARING. LOVE, LAINIE
Strand Avatar
November 5, 2009 at 11:55 PM
Bes wishes with this one Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks you for your welcome comments today.
Owens Avatar
November 5, 2009 at 10:07 PM
Very nice poem...enjoyed...Marty
Goff Avatar
November 5, 2009 at 5:53 PM
beautiful journey! well done! Carrie! good luck in Constance's contest! jimbo
Townsend Avatar
November 5, 2009 at 4:13 PM
A magical journey indeed. Great luck to you in the contest. This is a truly enchanting piece. Well done. Smiles from Lolita
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