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Star Gazer

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He awoke from a fitful repose his legs twitching in death throes, each held by a pinion driven through his ankles. He opened his eyes from the sojourn of deep-sleep oblivion. He peered through a shroud of blood and pain, which threatened successfully to besmirch the splendor of the celestial array of stars in the firmament above. His neck and arms were also pinned to the ground with wooden stakes. As his blood seeped into the desert sands draining his life away, his lithe lissome limbs and body lamented his decision to walk alone through the bad-lands, to see the stars all bright and unencumbered by the lights of civilization.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/9/2018 10:29:00 PM
I love it, John. Well done. Congrats on your top win.
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Date: 6/4/2018 11:33:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this poem story.
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Date: 6/4/2018 7:45:00 PM
Great use of the 8 words and, John, with great imagery ; congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 6/4/2018 11:11:00 AM
Very chilling write John, I almost forgot there were 8 words required, it was that seamless of a write, well done, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 5/27/2018 2:42:00 PM
Thought I'd drop by, I haven't been reading near enough for about a month - time won't let me. This is a profound poem that grabbed and held me; it is dark but not cheap dark, no - to me its darkness is appropriate to the tale and wonderful way you ended the poem. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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