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Paul Schneiter

Date: 10/20/2014 8:00:00 PM

This is lovely. What makes it so (seems to me) is its elegant simplicity. You have proven that it doesn't take a lot of words to create poetic beauty. Congratulations on a beautiful composition. I love it.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 10/8/2014 6:19:00 AM

I hate to disagree with you dear lady but to me, you ARE a star who shines, twinkles and glitters but I AGREE with the last 5 lines...You are ALL of the lines in this 'radiant' poem of yours. You never cease to amaze...

Matthew Anish

Date: 10/7/2014 6:17:00 PM

I like the way you portrayed your self as a "pale shade" - it is an excellent metaphor! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/7/2014 5:48:00 PM

i tip my hat charmaine very beautifully penned dear friend

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/7/2014 4:09:00 PM

Fantabulous Char. I love it!!!!

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/7/2014 4:07:00 PM

Charma, I really like your write here very much. The message of the twinkle and the reassuring warming light and sweet comfort is indeed quite positive and quite wonderful. Superb write!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary

Troy Greece

Date: 10/7/2014 3:06:00 PM

But you twinkle although you may not know it. Lustrous poem is pastel glow!. Thank you for coming my way, Charmaine.

Joseph May

Date: 10/7/2014 3:01:00 PM

I love this one.....Great write....

Tim Smith

Date: 10/7/2014 2:42:00 PM

Your warmth shines through your words...You are definitely a diamond in my eyes...sparkling so bright....lighting up the gloom and doom....I love how I get to see all the different faces of you :).....hugs Tim

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/7/2014 12:23:00 PM

Dear Charma, Although you definitely do radiate, I like thinking of you as a "warming light" that spreads comfort to others. You have always done this in your poetry. This poem goes to my faves as it surely describes the feelings people have toward you. Love, Carolyn

Jan Allison

Date: 10/7/2014 11:35:00 AM

the title drew me in and the poem did not disappoint! - level 42 did a track of this name- great poem Charmaine:-) hugs Jan

Eve Roper

Date: 10/7/2014 11:14:00 AM

Very beautiful told, :) eve

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 10/7/2014 10:16:00 AM

Don't search for gold....ha..pretty.