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A bi g star shining up above in a black sky. It twinkles and sparkles and whispers my name no other star fills the wide velvet expanse and I dream that I have flown up to it. I hang there dangling swinging, feel small and tiny insignificant dinky, trivial I stayed all night, till morn then fell do wn ______________________________________ December 17, 2018 Written for the contest, The Shape Of My Art sponsor, Line Gauthier

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Date: 12/24/2018 3:14:00 AM
Fantastic poem!! Exciting words and shape. -JWE
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Date: 12/24/2018 8:59:00 AM
JWE, thanks for the visiting with the fantastic, appreciate ~
Date: 12/18/2018 9:51:00 AM
Great fun shape! A surprise ending!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/18/2018 1:55:00 PM
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Date: 12/18/2018 6:53:00 AM
Love this artistic poetry.
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Date: 12/18/2018 1:55:00 PM
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Date: 12/17/2018 5:34:00 PM
this is fantastic, not just the shape but the sweet succinct words ,Dear Heart.
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Date: 12/18/2018 1:54:00 PM
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Date: 12/17/2018 4:53:00 PM
Awesome design with poem. Reads like a great contender. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 12/18/2018 1:54:00 PM
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