Standards Slip Backwards

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unrhymed tercets in twelve lines where the king is no longer crowned under the word justice

Not upholding virtues correctly stripping certain rights from the living a nation becomes corrupt and lawless When certain values are removed in favour of the upside down justice which expels God from its court In favour of Ceaser's law feed the innocent to the lions so to speak honestly has been removed From such doctrine replaced by a state of chaos written records with accuracy where certain freedom's have been removed by unholy acts

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 5/24/2018 8:19:00 AM

Hi Liam!:))Wow! A very powerful, excellent poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.All so beautifully penned.Very heartfelt!Whole world is all upside down as we know it now.It breaks my heart to see all terrible things happening all over.All signs of the last days according to the Bible, Liam.Prayers are very powerful, n' we need to pray now to God more than ever for everyone n' everything, Liam.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen. Just awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A Fav!Take good care of yourself!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^