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Stammer -Sf

The pulse races, the mind falters, the tongue stumbles, the speech a-jumble. My wretched stammer leaves aspirations in tatters. My heart broken by the words unspoken.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/18/2013 7:03:00 PM

Choo, , Awesome free verse... xox~ Linda,

Monterey Sirak

Date: 11/18/2013 7:43:00 AM

Fantastic write. So heartfelt. Congrats on your win

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/17/2013 7:12:00 PM

Such a heartfelt write. So deserving of a win. I must check out your work..this is awesome. BG

Choo Sum Lee
Date: 11/25/2013 7:33:00 AM

Thank you. It's always great to have more critics to one's work. Whether you like'em or loathe'em, please comment!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2013 6:09:00 PM

Choo Sum, I do not know if I met you before, but how wonderful to know you under the circumstances of giving you a top win, third place in my SF contest. Short like I wanted but full of meaning. Congrats on your win.

Choo Sum Lee
Date: 11/25/2013 7:30:00 AM

Thank you so much ! I've completely forgotten about submitting this piece as an entry . I am having a difficult time living with SAD (Social Anxiety Disorder) and just scribbled this to vent out some frustration.