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Stalker

STALKER I rue the darkness follows me ‘neath faded yellow streetlights surrounded by the dance passing shadows leery of soft lights. I fear the demons that I seek to keep at bay the demons that I flee. I lurk beneath an undrawn curtain center stage no lights no lines no audience. I blend into the shadows lonely figures grays and blacks retreating into darkness. I stalk a man gone too far, too long stalking the demon stalking me. ©11/7/2017 submitted to – STALKER – Poetry Contest

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Date: 11/25/2017 8:01:00 AM
Nicely done, John - deep and dark, with a subtly unsettling undertone. Congratulations on your First Place win!! Regards, John.
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Date: 11/19/2017 1:05:00 AM
Well done, John, a suitable haunted and tortured write, love the structure, too. Regards, Viv
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Date: 11/18/2017 5:26:00 PM
A wonderful poem, John, Congratulations on your top placement. Sandra
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Date: 11/18/2017 4:44:00 AM
Sincere congrats on your well-deserved win, John ... blessings! :-)
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Date: 11/17/2017 7:11:00 PM
So very dark !!! Love the last stanza! Congratulations on your win John!! Amazing write! ~Judy
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Date: 11/17/2017 3:25:00 PM
Congrats John, much enjoyed :)
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Date: 11/17/2017 1:34:00 PM
This is a dark and deep write, you captured the theme very well in your write.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest
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Date: 11/17/2017 1:32:00 PM
Really great John. Enjoyed the read. Congratulations on your top placement.
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Date: 11/14/2017 10:58:00 AM
Wow! That was some write. Loved how you formatted it. Such a different talk on the theme. Amazing. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/9/2017 12:10:00 AM
So nicely composed.A Great Work. Congrats John
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Date: 11/8/2017 2:44:00 PM
John , this is an excellent write . So well done !
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