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Staircase

The enclosed porch framed a weather-beaten door. The door was slightly opened when I knocked on it. I slowly set foot inside the musty dark drawing room; little light shown through from the stained-glass window. I reach and slowly move my fingers over the flower rosette carved into the old elegant red oak staircase railing. I do walk up the stairs to see the same as on the door frames. Passing through in the nostalgic silence of the empty house I could hear the echo whispers of life of its past. 4/8/2023 Writing Challenge - 'S' Words, Poetry Contest 10. staircase Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 4/18/2023 5:09:00 PM
Oh, how I wish I owned a grand home such as this... Your poem takes me there... It is exquisite, Eve, so rich in detail...
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Date: 4/17/2023 4:01:00 PM
The quality of hand carved furniture is all but a thing of the past. Your staircase is both beautiful and alluring. The imagery was enjoyable, Eve. Bill
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Date: 4/14/2023 3:26:00 PM
Oh Eve, I just read your poem. It's beautiful! I just love it! So full of imagery, I went up the staircase with you. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/12/2023 5:30:00 PM
Beautiful imagery Eve. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 4/12/2023 1:18:00 PM
Congratulations, Eve. Your wonderful poetry left a comforting impression on me. Your win is largely deserved.
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Date: 4/12/2023 10:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write. I enjoyed this one. Have a blessed day writing away.............
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Date: 4/12/2023 10:23:00 AM
Eve, thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Date: 4/12/2023 10:19:00 AM
- An echo of the past...lovely written, Eve :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 4/9/2023 1:24:00 AM
That was perfectly full of imagery. Well done. Best for a win.
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Date: 4/8/2023 9:52:00 PM
What a vivid scene you "painted" in this poem. Love it. Best regards, Eve.
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