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There once was guy named Steve He swam in a pool with Eve With a frisky smile He undressed her with guile In nine months she was to conceive

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/1/2015 6:35:00 PM
It's so good to find limericks here that are well written like this one. Keep it up. I really enjoyed this one.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/1/2015 7:30:00 PM
why thank you!
Date: 2/28/2015 9:02:00 PM
Came back to make sure that you know that it's today that Jim the Trim and Kim will use Eve and Steve's pool. No? Too bad, they're already there! I also invited Jan and Stan, let's have a party! Uh, Arthur, sorry, I forgot, what's the name of your date?
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/1/2015 7:30:00 PM
I prefer 50 shades of breathing LOL
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/28/2015 9:44:00 PM
I dont have a date! :(
Date: 2/28/2015 11:42:00 AM
Hah! Eve and Steve, eh? I'll come out with Jim and Kim...lol. Delighted and enchanted with your style, where's your round table, sire? Hugs and smiles!
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/28/2015 6:26:00 PM
I'll come out Jan and Stan lol:-) Hugs Jan xx -
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/28/2015 6:24:00 PM
LOL I am round, the table is square!!!
Date: 2/28/2015 3:08:00 AM
Reminds me of a trip to the Bahamas
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/28/2015 6:23:00 PM
Hi Tim, thanks!!!!!
Date: 2/28/2015 1:46:00 AM
Ha ha ha Arthur - Fab Limerick:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 2/28/2015 6:25:00 PM
I am thank you - humour helps - am up and down a bit lol - I wrote a limerick this morning :-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/28/2015 6:23:00 PM
Thanks Jan, hope you feeling a wee bit better!! xxx
Date: 2/28/2015 12:27:00 AM
With that pool, anything can happen: )
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/28/2015 6:22:00 PM
My feelings exactly!!! :)

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