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St Eve, a Lovers Limerick

There once was guy named Steve
He swam in a pool with Eve
With a frisky smile
He undressed her with guile
In nine months she was to conceive
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 6:35 PM
It's so good to find limericks here that are well written like this one. Keep it up. I really enjoyed this one.
Vaso Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 7:30 PM
why thank you!
Nunez Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 9:02 PM
Came back to make sure that you know that it's today that Jim the Trim and Kim will use Eve and Steve's pool. No? Too bad, they're already there! I also invited Jan and Stan, let's have a party! Uh, Arthur, sorry, I forgot, what's the name of your date?
Vaso Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 7:30 PM
I prefer 50 shades of breathing LOL
Vaso Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 9:44 PM
I dont have a date! :(
Nunez Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 11:42 AM
Hah! Eve and Steve, eh? I'll come out with Jim and Kim...lol. Delighted and enchanted with your style, where's your round table, sire? Hugs and smiles!
Allison Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 6:26 PM
I'll come out Jan and Stan lol:-) Hugs Jan xx -
Vaso Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 6:24 PM
LOL I am round, the table is square!!!
Smith Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 3:08 AM
Reminds me of a trip to the Bahamas
Vaso Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 6:23 PM
Hi Tim, thanks!!!!!
Allison Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 1:46 AM
Ha ha ha Arthur - Fab Limerick:-) hugs Jan xxx
Allison Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 6:25 PM
I am thank you - humour helps - am up and down a bit lol - I wrote a limerick this morning :-) Hugs Jan xxx
Vaso Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 6:23 PM
Thanks Jan, hope you feeling a wee bit better!! xxx
Hunjeri Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 12:27 AM
With that pool, anything can happen: )
Vaso Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 6:22 PM
My feelings exactly!!! :)
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