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* I've often mused on how beautiful places and days sometimes hold ugly scenes within them, (like the horrors of 9/11 on a perfect, autumn morning) ... with such ambiguity in mind, the following: *

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He found her on the ledges, there So lashed unto a mast ... Seaweed twined through raven hair Moony gaze now naught but stares Sweet blushing bosom frozen, bare Death's wan, pearly caste ... All shimmering 'neath St. Elmo's Fire. He heard the shipwreck in the night Lamenting 'midst the gale ... Crashed to rocks with caps of white Torn beam-to-keel by stormy might Thunderous echoes pealed its plight To sing the siren's wail ... All shimmering 'neath St. Elmo's Fire. He'd said goodbye just days before A dream upon his lips ... With plans to marry and much more This bright, young lass he did adore That hence lay broken on this shore Within death's icy grips ... All shimmering 'neath St. Elmo's Fire. 'Twas strange to him this place allow Such wonder in daylight ... While there, amidst a shattered bow His dearest love, gone with their vow How could that peaceful beauty, now Hold such a horrid sight ... All shimmering 'neath St. Elmo's Fire?

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Date: 6/22/2021 6:05:00 PM
This is a masterpiece, Greg! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 6/21/2021 5:21:00 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/25/2020 10:28:00 AM
Lovely Greg--congrats!
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Date: 1/19/2020 6:44:00 PM
Masterful write, my friend. The rhymes are perfect but not singsong! And I love the thematic repetition in between each verse. Love gone perfectly expressed. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/19/2020 4:49:00 PM
The master has done it again!! Just WOW!!!!! Lonna
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Date: 1/18/2020 10:42:00 PM
Gregory, True poetry cast in the light and write of St Elmo's Fire. The siren's tragic tale told so very well. -Richard
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Date: 1/18/2020 11:38:00 AM
Wow what a write G, so emotive and dramatic, felt like a play script somehow, loved the refrain, gives it a melodic feel, and you KNOW I LOVE that!
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Date: 1/18/2020 10:38:00 AM
Solid gold, my friend! Romantic in the house!
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Date: 1/18/2020 9:54:00 AM
Top tier poetry. The repetition added to the experience. Well done.
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