Debra L Brown Poet Haiku

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Squirrel's Wedding Day

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                                     Squirrel's wedding day
                              Toasting them with acorn wine
                                  Two hearts intertwine.
 
                                     Jan, the blissful bride,
                                 dances down the giant tree.
                                   Stands by Sam, her love.
 
                                 Their hands and eyes meet.
                                  declaring their nuptial vows.
                                 Sam's speechless. "Married!"
 
                                  Such silly thoughts, smiles
                              He looks at Jan, his sweet bride.
                                    Life with you is home.

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Sara Kendrick April 24, 2026 at 5:08 PM Congrats on your work being featured on home page. Way to go. I enjoyed reading it today. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith April 3, 2022 at 8:39 AM WOW!! What a cute write/picture. The Help sign is priceless. It make me smile. Here are some smiles for you. Did you catch them????....................... Debra L Brown April 4, 2022 at 1:26 PM Thank you, Paula, I caught all those smiles, they came out as sunshine. Your words brighten my day Hugs, sending back the smiles.????.......

Bill Baker February 16, 2022 at 8:14 AM Such an enjoyable read, Debra. The squirrels were so cute, all dressed up for their wedding. I like it when poets and poetesses write more than one verse in their Haikus. Job well done, lots of fun. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill Debra L Brown February 18, 2022 at 12:14 PM Thank you Bill, Glad you enjoyed the poem. I have been learning a new forms of poetry. Blessings ~ Debra

Kim Rodrigues February 9, 2022 at 7:47 PM Love: toasting them with acorn wine! Debra L Brown February 11, 2022 at 3:32 PM It was quite a lovely wedding. Thanks for your comment. Hugs ~ Debra

Sara Kendrick February 8, 2022 at 1:32 PM Ahh!! How cute. I wonder who managed to get the clothes on the bride and groom. I enjoyed the snapshot and the work. Your visit to my page was inspiring. Sara Debra L Brown February 8, 2022 at 3:26 PM Thank you Sara for the sweet comment. I enjoy reading your poems. Blessings ~ Debra

M. L. Kiser February 8, 2022 at 12:52 PM Aw, how cute. A fun read indeed! Debra L Brown February 8, 2022 at 3:28 PM Thank for your sweet comment happy you enjoyed the poem. Blessings ~ Debra

Paul Callus February 8, 2022 at 12:28 PM Probably, being squirrels, they will live happily ever after! I doubt if they will have many squarrels. ~ This was an entertaining offering, Debra. ~ Regards // paul Debra L Brown February 8, 2022 at 3:34 PM They have a marriage licence to "squarrel" now. (LoL) I enjoyed your fun comment. Blessings ~ Debra

Evelyn Judy Buehler February 6, 2022 at 9:28 PM Your squirrel tale is too cute, Debra. Acorn wine, indeed! I got a real kick out of this. Best wishes, Evelyn :D Debra L Brown February 7, 2022 at 3:18 PM Thanks Evenly for stopping by and reading the poem and it brought a smile to your face. Blessings ~ Debra

Victor Buhagiar February 5, 2022 at 11:36 PM And they lived happily ever after. Except when they fought on the odd acorn :) Debra L Brown February 6, 2022 at 7:46 PM HA HA! Welcome to married life! (LoL) Victory! Your comment was a "hoot". Thanks for stopping by. Blessings ~ Debra

Anil Deo February 3, 2022 at 6:26 AM now, if Sam could be a god-fearing, one-woman, man! loved this Sis Debra. i also thank Jesus u know how to have clean fu. shalom shalom. PTL Debra L Brown February 3, 2022 at 11:45 AM Hello!Anil It is always a pleasure to talk to you. Life is depressing enough if you can't have a little fun. I have always enjoyed writing stories for kids. These are the up and coming readers. Blessings & Prayers Sister Debra

Charles Messina February 3, 2022 at 3:50 AM So cute, Debra. A lovely squirrelly tale :) Hugs, Charlie Debra L Brown February 3, 2022 at 11:23 AM Hi! Charles I'm happy you enjoyed the poem. Hugs & Blessings ~ Debra

Harry Horsman February 2, 2022 at 10:56 PM LOve your Squirrel love story. Debra. Debra L Brown February 3, 2022 at 11:22 AM I'm so happy you enjoy the poem. Thanks for stoping by, always a pleasure to talk to you. Debra

Valsa George February 2, 2022 at 7:58 PM So cute, Debra...Your poems have an innate charm as you have. Loved the image and the wedding ceremony ! Debra L Brown February 3, 2022 at 11:19 AM Your comments are very kind, Valsa. You missed the wedding reception. The squirrels were flying through the tree tops after drinking all of the acorn wine. L0L Thanks, Valsa. It's always a pleasure to talk to you, my friend. Debra

Darlene De Beaulieu February 2, 2022 at 3:01 PM Hello Debra Brown, oh you created a cute poem. it made me smile. Hugs. Darlene De Beaulieu February 3, 2022 at 11:10 AM Hello Debra, Yes I enjoyed this poem.Thank you. Hugs Debra L Brown February 2, 2022 at 3:07 PM Hello Sweet Darlene, I happy you enjoyed the poem. Always happy to see you. Blessings ~ Debra

I Am Anaya February 2, 2022 at 2:43 PM There is more to the Haiku that meets the eye...Wow! Love stuff apropos for up-coming Valentine's Day! And good luck! Debra L Brown February 2, 2022 at 3:05 PM Anaya so happy you stopped by.What a better way to celebrate Valentine's Day than to have a couple squirrels getting married. Blessings ~ Debra

Mystic Rose Rose February 2, 2022 at 2:38 PM Ah, sweet sweet sweet, how appropriate for an almost Valentine season, nicely done dear Deb, xo Debra L Brown February 2, 2022 at 2:58 PM Thank you Rose so sweet for you to comment. Nothing says Valentines Day than two hearts tying the knot. Blessing ~ Debra