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Squirrel's Wedding Day

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*** Squirrel's wedding day Toasting them with acorn wine Two hearts intertwine. Jan, the blissful bride, dances down the giant tree. Stands by Sam, her love. Their hands and eyes meet. declaring their nuptial vows. Sam's speechless. "Married!" Such silly thoughts, smiles He looks at Jan, his sweet bride. Life with you is home.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/3/2022 8:39:00 AM

WOW!! What a cute write/picture. The Help sign is priceless. It make me smile. Here are some smiles for you. Did you catch them????.......................

Debra L Brown
Date: 4/4/2022 1:26:00 PM

Thank you, Paula, I caught all those smiles, they came out as sunshine. Your words brighten my day Hugs, sending back the smiles.????.......

Bill Baker

Date: 2/16/2022 8:14:00 AM

Such an enjoyable read, Debra. The squirrels were so cute, all dressed up for their wedding. I like it when poets and poetesses write more than one verse in their Haikus. Job well done, lots of fun. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill

Debra L Brown
Date: 2/18/2022 12:14:00 PM

Thank you Bill, Glad you enjoyed the poem. I have been learning a new forms of poetry. Blessings ~ Debra

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/9/2022 7:47:00 PM

Love: toasting them with acorn wine!

Debra L Brown
Date: 2/11/2022 3:32:00 PM

It was quite a lovely wedding. Thanks for your comment. Hugs ~ Debra

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/8/2022 1:32:00 PM

Ahh!! How cute. I wonder who managed to get the clothes on the bride and groom. I enjoyed the snapshot and the work. Your visit to my page was inspiring. Sara

Debra L Brown
Date: 2/8/2022 3:26:00 PM

Thank you Sara for the sweet comment. I enjoy reading your poems. Blessings ~ Debra

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/8/2022 12:52:00 PM

Aw, how cute. A fun read indeed!

Debra L Brown
Date: 2/8/2022 3:28:00 PM

Thank for your sweet comment happy you enjoyed the poem. Blessings ~ Debra

Paul Callus

Date: 2/8/2022 12:28:00 PM

Probably, being squirrels, they will live happily ever after! I doubt if they will have many squarrels. ~ This was an entertaining offering, Debra. ~ Regards // paul

Debra L Brown
Date: 2/8/2022 3:34:00 PM

They have a marriage licence to "squarrel" now. (LoL) I enjoyed your fun comment. Blessings ~ Debra

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/6/2022 9:28:00 PM

Your squirrel tale is too cute, Debra. Acorn wine, indeed! I got a real kick out of this. Best wishes, Evelyn :D

Debra L Brown
Date: 2/7/2022 3:18:00 PM

Thanks Evenly for stopping by and reading the poem and it brought a smile to your face. Blessings ~ Debra

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/5/2022 11:36:00 PM

And they lived happily ever after. Except when they fought on the odd acorn :)

Debra L Brown
Date: 2/6/2022 7:46:00 PM

HA HA! Welcome to married life! (LoL) Victory! Your comment was a "hoot". Thanks for stopping by. Blessings ~ Debra

Anil Deo

Date: 2/3/2022 6:26:00 AM

now, if Sam could be a god-fearing, one-woman, man! loved this Sis Debra. i also thank Jesus u know how to have clean fu. shalom shalom. PTL

Debra L Brown
Date: 2/3/2022 11:45:00 AM

Hello!Anil It is always a pleasure to talk to you. Life is depressing enough if you can't have a little fun. I have always enjoyed writing stories for kids. These are the up and coming readers. Blessings & Prayers Sister Debra

Charles Messina

Date: 2/3/2022 3:50:00 AM

So cute, Debra. A lovely squirrelly tale :) Hugs, Charlie

Debra L Brown
Date: 2/3/2022 11:23:00 AM

Hi! Charles I'm happy you enjoyed the poem. Hugs & Blessings ~ Debra

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/2/2022 10:56:00 PM

LOve your Squirrel love story. Debra.

Debra L Brown
Date: 2/3/2022 11:22:00 AM

I'm so happy you enjoy the poem. Thanks for stoping by, always a pleasure to talk to you. Debra

Valsa George

Date: 2/2/2022 7:58:00 PM

So cute, Debra...Your poems have an innate charm as you have. Loved the image and the wedding ceremony !

Debra L Brown
Date: 2/3/2022 11:19:00 AM

Your comments are very kind, Valsa. You missed the wedding reception. The squirrels were flying through the tree tops after drinking all of the acorn wine. L0L Thanks, Valsa. It's always a pleasure to talk to you, my friend. Debra

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/2/2022 3:01:00 PM

Hello Debra Brown, oh you created a cute poem. it made me smile. Hugs.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/3/2022 11:10:00 AM

Hello Debra, Yes I enjoyed this poem.Thank you. Hugs

Debra L Brown
Date: 2/2/2022 3:07:00 PM

Hello Sweet Darlene, I happy you enjoyed the poem. Always happy to see you. Blessings ~ Debra

I Am Anaya

Date: 2/2/2022 2:43:00 PM

There is more to the Haiku that meets the eye...Wow! Love stuff apropos for up-coming Valentine's Day! And good luck!

Debra L Brown
Date: 2/2/2022 3:05:00 PM

Anaya so happy you stopped by.What a better way to celebrate Valentine's Day than to have a couple squirrels getting married. Blessings ~ Debra

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/2/2022 2:38:00 PM

Ah, sweet sweet sweet, how appropriate for an almost Valentine season, nicely done dear Deb, xo

Debra L Brown
Date: 2/2/2022 2:58:00 PM

Thank you Rose so sweet for you to comment. Nothing says Valentines Day than two hearts tying the knot. Blessing ~ Debra