Squall

He packed it all after the big fight
And drove away in the dead of night
Leaves the pain that cut like a knife
He’d done everything to make it work right

She lays on the bed and stares at walls
Thinking maybe that he’ll call
It wasn’t the first time they’d faced squalls
Hadn’t she done everything, after all

He drives on and thinks of the past
And why they couldn’t make it last
He knew that now the die was cast
And he was never going back

She wakes up, he’s still gone
She thought he would be home by dawn
She stretches and rises with one last yawn
Conclusions yet are not foregone

He pulls off to get some sleep
Something that he desperately needs
The sleep that comes is long and deep
And through the pores the anger seeps

The day is long, she gets no news
It’s already been a week or two
And then he called out of the blue
He said it’s over, this was the truth

She drops the phone in disbelief
He hangs up so very relieved
Their time together had not been brief
But she had caused him so much grief
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 10/18/2009 12:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poem being featured! ~Trudy~
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Date: 10/15/2009 4:43:00 PM
EXCELLENT! J.B. Thank you for sharaing this well deserved feature of the week. lainie
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Date: 10/15/2009 9:01:00 AM
Congratulations...Rhonda Hero
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Date: 10/12/2009 1:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, JB >> James
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Date: 10/12/2009 10:43:00 AM
Hi JB Very emotional, enjoyed this well written Monorhyme. Congrats on your feature poem this week! Thanks for sharing. Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 10/12/2009 3:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week J B. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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