Anonomus Scorpio Poet Monorhyme

Springtime Will Be Unique

Your beautiful vanity will resurrect the weak
Growing emeralds changing landscapes by the week
The pitiful old man couldn't see past obsessive bleak
His white canvas now serves to feed that which you seek
The maple fire in your eyes now flows with every creak
Oh, beautiful mother, that ice will become your creek
So long this is goodbye, this springtime will be unique

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Paige Hind April 5, 2023 at 8:53 AM Just beautiful. You are improving more and more! Sorry I have been away and not been able to read anything. Love the maple eyes reference! Wonderful poem! Anonomus Scorpio April 5, 2023 at 9:04 AM No apologies Paige we all have real lives too! It is wonderful to have you reading my work as always. I'm very glad you enjoyed this particular piece! Warmest regards A.S.

Sara Kendrick March 31, 2023 at 10:37 AM I enjoyed reading this one today. I like the personification of spring and its beauty plus in places its conceitedness.Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara Anonomus Scorpio March 31, 2023 at 10:41 AM Good to see you as always Sara! Best Regards A.S.

Valsa George March 30, 2023 at 8:51 PM Well done dear friend. No doubt spring time is beautiful and unique ! Anonomus Scorpio March 30, 2023 at 9:16 PM Thank so very much Valsa! Your visits are always appreciated! A.S.

Daniel Turner March 30, 2023 at 1:13 PM Nicely penned AS. A well written monorhyme. They can be difficult to write. You did good! Anonomus Scorpio March 30, 2023 at 1:20 PM Thank you DT I enjoy messing around with homophones had a little fun with them on this one too. My muse has been a bit all over the place as of late.