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Springtime Will Be Unique

Your beautiful vanity will resurrect the weak Growing emeralds changing landscapes by the week The pitiful old man couldn't see past obsessive bleak His white canvas now serves to feed that which you seek The maple fire in your eyes now flows with every creak Oh, beautiful mother, that ice will become your creek So long this is goodbye, this springtime will be unique

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Paige Hind

Date: 4/5/2023 8:53:00 AM

Just beautiful. You are improving more and more! Sorry I have been away and not been able to read anything. Love the maple eyes reference! Wonderful poem!

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 4/5/2023 9:04:00 AM

No apologies Paige we all have real lives too! It is wonderful to have you reading my work as always. I'm very glad you enjoyed this particular piece! Warmest regards A.S.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/31/2023 10:37:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this one today. I like the personification of spring and its beauty plus in places its conceitedness.Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 3/31/2023 10:41:00 AM

Good to see you as always Sara! Best Regards A.S.

Valsa George

Date: 3/30/2023 8:51:00 PM

Well done dear friend. No doubt spring time is beautiful and unique !

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 3/30/2023 9:16:00 PM

Thank so very much Valsa! Your visits are always appreciated! A.S.

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/30/2023 1:13:00 PM

Nicely penned AS. A well written monorhyme. They can be difficult to write. You did good!

Anonomus Scorpio
Date: 3/30/2023 1:20:00 PM

Thank you DT I enjoy messing around with homophones had a little fun with them on this one too. My muse has been a bit all over the place as of late.