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Springtime Beauty

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Sweetly breathing springtime, exhilarating; singing songsters sublime, communicating. Winter damage mended, tantalizingly; snowstorms, snowflakes ended, agonizingly. Flowers blooming pretty, appreciated; growing fragrant airy, invigorated. Springtime beauty delight, unfathomable; dancing, whirling nephrite, imaginable. _________________________ February 15, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/Springtime Beauty Copyright Protected, ID 18-9947-00-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, 88 Syllables sponsor, Joseph May Third Place

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/9/2018 7:47:00 PM

Well done, BW. Congrats on your win.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/15/2018 10:00:00 PM

Wonderful imagery in your poem, Broken Wings, and written very well. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 3/15/2018 9:47:00 PM

What a gorgeous and thoughtful write - I enjoyed this very much! Blessings and congratulations on your wonderful win, Constance - keep up the great work, my friend! :-) <3

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/14/2018 6:30:00 PM

A lovely entry for the contest Constance. I found it a challenge that took some time. Congratulations on your wonderful win! xxoo : )

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 3/14/2018 4:16:00 PM

Congratulations, Constance. Very well thought out and put together piece.

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 3/14/2018 1:53:00 PM

Creative use of five-syllable rhyming words, Constance. Your whole piece flows nicely. A hearty commendation on both your piece and placement in the contest.

Mick Talbot

Date: 2/18/2018 8:19:00 AM

Constance, Spring is on the page, every word a breath of that springtime fresh air! Good luck in the contest... Mick

Eve Roper

Date: 2/15/2018 8:26:00 PM

nicely done ,, luck in the contest :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2018 6:29:00 PM

This is really lovely, Constance. I need to read up on his contest. I see you used just one word in every other line and am not sure if that is a requirement but I love that style you used. Another contest I hope to get to!!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/15/2018 1:40:00 PM

This poem has the best ending. Please know this.

Constance La France
Date: 2/15/2018 3:26:00 PM

Carmen, thank you for visiting my poem !

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/15/2018 12:27:00 PM

Delightful with its fresh spring aroma. Well done, BW. I love the last line that turns the poem into a modest and candid situation of having a poet at work... yet in reality, it completes the poem marvelously. Adorable.

Constance La France
Date: 2/15/2018 3:25:00 PM

Line, thank you for that lovely comment !