Constance La France Poet Rhyme

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Springtime Beauty

Sweetly breathing springtime,
exhilarating;
singing songsters sublime,
communicating.

Winter damage mended,
tantalizingly;
snowstorms, snowflakes ended,
agonizingly.

Flowers blooming pretty,
appreciated;
growing fragrant airy,
invigorated.

Springtime beauty delight,
unfathomable;
dancing, whirling nephrite,
imaginable.




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February 15, 2018


Poetry/Rhyme/Springtime Beauty
Copyright Protected, ID 18-9947-00-01
All Rights Reserved.  Written Under Pseudonym.



Written for the contest, 88 Syllables
sponsor, Joseph May

Third Place

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Line Gauthier April 9, 2018 at 7:47 PM Well done, BW. Congrats on your win.

Eve Roper March 15, 2018 at 10:00 PM Wonderful imagery in your poem, Broken Wings, and written very well. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*

Gregory Richard Barden March 15, 2018 at 9:47 PM What a gorgeous and thoughtful write - I enjoyed this very much! Blessings and congratulations on your wonderful win, Constance - keep up the great work, my friend! :-) <3

Connie Marcum Wong March 14, 2018 at 6:30 PM A lovely entry for the contest Constance. I found it a challenge that took some time. Congratulations on your wonderful win! xxoo : )

Rhoda Tripp March 14, 2018 at 4:16 PM Congratulations, Constance. Very well thought out and put together piece.

Reason A. Poteet March 14, 2018 at 1:53 PM Creative use of five-syllable rhyming words, Constance. Your whole piece flows nicely. A hearty commendation on both your piece and placement in the contest.

Mick Talbot February 18, 2018 at 8:19 AM Constance, Spring is on the page, every word a breath of that springtime fresh air! Good luck in the contest... Mick

Eve Roper February 15, 2018 at 8:26 PM nicely done ,, luck in the contest :)

Andrea Dietrich February 15, 2018 at 6:29 PM This is really lovely, Constance. I need to read up on his contest. I see you used just one word in every other line and am not sure if that is a requirement but I love that style you used. Another contest I hope to get to!!

Caren Krutsinger February 15, 2018 at 1:40 PM This poem has the best ending. Please know this. Constance La France February 15, 2018 at 3:26 PM Carmen, thank you for visiting my poem !

Line Gauthier February 15, 2018 at 12:27 PM Delightful with its fresh spring aroma. Well done, BW. I love the last line that turns the poem into a modest and candid situation of having a poet at work... yet in reality, it completes the poem marvelously. Adorable. Constance La France February 15, 2018 at 3:25 PM Line, thank you for that lovely comment !