Springtime Again - the Lanturne Style

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~Springtime Again~ (Lanturne Suite) Spring Time a Nice season Everything green Sings Sun Comes out Birds sings and Children outside Play Days Are cool Nights are sweet Weathers nice and Warm The Sun shines Air is fresh When some rain falls Too At Times we See rainbows appear across Sky In The sun Butterflies Just dance around By And Again Beautiful Roses start to Bloom. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 April.09.2017 “Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” - Mark Twain ~Author's Notes: The "Lanturne" is a Japanese form or style shaped like a paper lantern.

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Victoria Georgieva

Date: 4/10/2017 1:32:00 AM

Sweet poem, spring is lovely even when it is raining, it is my favourite season, very nice description ,love,Viki xx

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 4/10/2017 8:19:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Victoria, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem. Deeply appreciated :)Wishing you a very lovely week! In his light God bless you always!:)D