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Stunning spring listen to songbirds sing Dainty daffodils add color to high hills Fledgling flies watched by eager eyes Busy bees will pollinate tulip trees Leaping lambs irk resting rams Forest flowers enjoy spring showers Breathtaking blooms waft pretty perfumes Alliterisen - 7 Lines Poetry Contest 9,11,8,10,7,9,9 checked with How many syllables Rhyme Checked with rhymezone Sponsored by Joseph May 11/25/21

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/2/2021 8:39:00 PM

Congratulations! I knew this one would win when I read it.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/1/2021 10:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. I love spring and I love this write/picture. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Constance La France

Date: 11/30/2021 9:36:00 AM

Jan, truly a lovely poem and a big congratulations on your win in Joseph's Alliterisen contest, wonderful images ~ love and serenity _Constance

Charles Messina

Date: 11/29/2021 4:52:00 PM

Very nicely done, Jan. Congrats on your win! PS: I hope you are feeling better...Sending love & hugs // Charlie xx

Jenna Logan

Date: 11/29/2021 10:49:00 AM

Excellently portrayed, Jan. Congrats.

Joseph May

Date: 11/29/2021 6:54:00 AM

Lovely Spring scenes, Wonderful write Jan, Congrats on your win

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 11/28/2021 3:08:00 AM

A nice tribute to spring..Delice

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 11/26/2021 8:22:00 PM

Hello Jan ... I really enjoyed your poem Jan. It's as stunning as the beauty you wrote in it - Lindsay

Jack Horne

Date: 11/26/2021 12:44:00 PM

love this beautiful write

Jan Allison
Date: 11/26/2021 3:42:00 PM

Thanks Jack:-) hugs Jan xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 11/26/2021 10:19:00 AM

I am with Victor; that line is victory for sure! Aloha! Rico

Jan Allison
Date: 11/26/2021 3:42:00 PM

Thanks Rico:-) hugs Jan xx

Valsa George

Date: 11/26/2021 7:52:00 AM

This is indeed lovely ! I feel you are heading for another win, Jan !

Jan Allison
Date: 11/26/2021 3:41:00 PM

Thanks Valsa:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 11/26/2021 6:18:00 AM

Descriptive and very good use of alliteration, Jan. Hope you are much better now. Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 11/26/2021 3:41:00 PM

Thanks Paul I am hoping the tiredness is a little less now:-) hugs Jan xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/26/2021 2:16:00 AM

Loved the idea of lambs irking the rams. Best for a win and hope you are well now. Hugs.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/26/2021 3:40:00 PM

Thanks Victor that's my favourite line:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/26/2021 1:34:00 AM

Looking forward to spring already, get the next couple of months out of the way. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 11/26/2021 3:40:00 PM

Thanks Tom, cant wait for Spring the weather is dire at the moment:-) hugs Jan xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/25/2021 9:54:00 PM

Your first word in this poem, says everything Jan, its lovely.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/26/2021 3:39:00 PM

Thanks so much Harry:-) hugs Jan xx

L Milton Hankins

Date: 11/25/2021 6:43:00 PM

Beautifully-composed, Jan. You have put these marvelous images into words that refresh like a sping shower. Good stuff!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/26/2021 3:39:00 PM

Thanks Milton:-) hugs Jan xx

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/25/2021 3:39:00 PM

Jan, you captured exquisite spring scenery with excellent wording and rhythm. I wish you good luck in the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/26/2021 3:38:00 PM

Thanks Lasaad:-) hugs Jan xx