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Spring's Show

In the howling wind, I stand steady I can hear the chimes spread music The trees creek their language slowly Sounds all around me penetrate Into my being, as I remain to be still Ripples flow across mud filled puddles Snow melts quickly, revealing the grass I am still, as the high rocky cliffs That release ice into a water’s flow And all of this change will blow, Through an open door to spring’s show Heidi Sands 3/4/20

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Jenish Somadas

Date: 3/4/2020 11:49:00 PM

The trees creek their language slowly... Wonderful lines.. Waiting for that Spring Show...

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/5/2020 10:04:00 AM

Thank you Jenish. Happy Spring to come :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/4/2020 8:04:00 PM

Powerful and majestic write, my friend. I see you standing strong against the vicissitudes of the change in seasons. Great penning! :) Gershon

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/5/2020 10:05:00 AM

I was, Gershon . The wind almost tipped me over lol. Thank you for your kind comment. Have a nice day :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/4/2020 12:16:00 PM

Sounds like winter is just hanging on and going out with a bang, spring will soon make her grand entrance, loved the image of the trees creeking in the wind. Tom

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/4/2020 1:49:00 PM

We may actually get Spring sooner this year Tom. We had it very late last year. Thank you and have a nice day :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/4/2020 11:47:00 AM

Beautiful verses evoke uplifting scenes of spring--enjoyed the voice of your poem, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/4/2020 11:58:00 AM

Thank you for your consistent support. I appreciate your comments. I hope you have a nice day :)