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Spring's First Leaf

thaw so bare yesterday oak tree revives spring *April 10, 2017

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/5/2018 2:30:00 PM

A lovely spring poem that I know many on the east coast are waiting for. It has been such a harsh winter for everyone. xxoo

Fj Thomas

Date: 4/3/2018 4:58:00 PM

A perfect lanturne Carolyn :)

Thvia Shetley

Date: 9/11/2017 10:28:00 AM

Oh Carolyn, how I miss your work. Come back to us. I say that, having disappeared for a long time so I get it. We need you here.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 8/20/2017 3:08:00 PM

Hope you are well. Lovely poem.

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/11/2017 5:36:00 PM

oh so pleased to read you again Carolyn. wonderful poetry, beautiful image... i do hope you are keeping well....

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 8/6/2017 10:02:00 AM

Short n sweet n seasonal charm altogether. Thumbs up. Warm greetings. Nice to read from u again. Pls do write your thoughts about my latest poem too, under it.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/14/2017 8:09:00 AM

I can see this embroidered on a beautiful pillow in the shades of spring Carolyn. It is exquisite! I hope you are well my friend? A Fave! ; )

Canny Amah

Date: 5/25/2017 5:54:00 AM

'tis so natural ... just sure ... as the air you breathe! well penned! keep fit, Carolyn!

Carol B.

Date: 5/11/2017 4:11:00 PM

Hope you're well. Looking forward to reading more poetry from you :)

Darren White

Date: 4/29/2017 10:38:00 AM

that is a great lanterne. Thaw - Spring. Wonderful.

Amy Sullivan

Date: 4/24/2017 12:41:00 PM

Beautiful imagery with so few words. So nicely penned Carolyn. :)

Chris Hagy

Date: 4/22/2017 10:49:00 AM

This is very elegant both for the lips and the eye...lovely Carolyn :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/17/2017 3:35:00 PM

O Hall have sent you Mail!

Joe Maverick

Date: 4/17/2017 3:29:00 PM

Hello again Carolyn, the bluebells are out in the UK now this write strike just the right tone in the scheme of things.'

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/16/2017 2:09:00 PM

Lovely Carolyn. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Happy Easter my friend. ; ) 7

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/15/2017 10:16:00 AM

Congratulations on a great win, Carolyn, well deserved:)

Afolabi Muideen

Date: 4/13/2017 4:11:00 AM

You have penned a beautiful poem. Congestions on your win.

Joseph May

Date: 4/12/2017 7:29:00 PM

Congrats on your win Carolyn

Constance La France

Date: 4/12/2017 1:37:00 PM

Carolyn congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Lanterne. It makes me dream of Spring.

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/12/2017 9:45:00 AM

Excellent in both from and delivery, The imagery and shear innocence of your words are impressive. Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/11/2017 6:49:00 PM

The shape even kind of looks like a leaf. Constance will have a marvelous time seeing all these beautiful Lanternes.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/11/2017 5:54:00 PM

Very interesting work..Short and to the point..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Paul Callus

Date: 4/11/2017 1:44:00 PM

Yours is a Lanterne whicht celebrates life's awakening, Carolyn. I find myself comparing winter's last leaf (another entry I read) to spring's first leaf! Hugs // paul

Joseph May

Date: 4/10/2017 6:03:00 PM

Aah..The beauty of spring...nicely penned Carolyn

Frederic Parker

Date: 4/10/2017 3:43:00 PM

nice..yes the leaves on all my crape myrtles are starting to show..good luck with the contest