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springing

My dorm room was bright this morning. It was disorienting.
The sky outside was a cloudless, striking neon blue.
The air was so crisp and clean, I could hardly feel it going in and out.
It all sparked to create a diffused sense of well-being.

Gone, it seems, were the concrete bunker feels of winter.

There's been some loose talk of ‘spring’ lately—I thought it was fake news—but from my third floor lattice windows I could see what looked like people outside. They were walking in the sunshine, riding bikes, throwing frisbees, kicking ??hacky sacks, a couple was making out in the grass—it was a riot of activity.

Sunny skiffed out of her room (which looks like a hotel room trashed by some rock star), she seemed lighter than air. Three days ago, she announced there was someone of “particular personal significance,” in her life (translate: girlfriend).
Start the schmaltzy, string-drenched soundtrack—love is in the air.

Our challenge now is to carve out a poised and measured final act to our undergraduate years. There’s a scurrying, cynosure, beehive, hyperfocus to labs and classes, a heightened, almost cinematic quality, as if, up to now, we’ve only been practicing for some undefined ‘real thing.’
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Songs for this:
Daylight by Harry Styles
Ain't Nothing Like the Real Thing by Michael McDonald
Dizzy (feat. Alfie Templeman & Thomas Headon) by chloe moriondo
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Skiffed = narrowly missed hitting someone
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Fallica Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 2:31 PM
<3 . I recall our last days in college was a scurrying of completing assignments, crossing t s, dotting i s, and hunting down job prospects. I expect the spring melt is well underway back home in the Adirondacks and Mud Season has arrived there by now. Here in Southern CA, we can tell the winter is over because the temperature hasn’t dropped down to 50F for a while. I imagine Athens is similar.
Vionet Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 5:19 PM
It’s between 50 & 70 these days - beautiful - everyone’s out of their hiding places ??
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