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Spring With The Wall

It's partial to Winter's bark gloom and weed bite— Then comes Spring with his light massaging through stone, In cold spots along her dark towering spine— That lovers can lean into when they're alone. Where on the wire, tender ivy tones thicken With her new time's leaf under glowing heaven, There her flowers assail his part with the lust— The climb from below scented beds amorous.

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Date: 4/9/2024 2:19:00 PM
What a lovely, satisfying conclusion this has to offer, Hilda. Remarkable poem
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Date: 4/8/2024 4:43:00 PM
Beautiful! I thought you might find something soft and sweet within this form. It suites you <3. Warmly A.S.
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Date: 3/31/2024 8:36:00 PM
So often spring makes people fanciful. I like the touch of beginnings that your poem offers.
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Date: 3/31/2024 7:19:00 PM
A nice sensuous write!
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Date: 3/31/2024 2:07:00 PM
What a beautiful ending this has on it. Awesome rispetto
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Date: 3/31/2024 4:46:00 AM
Your poem poem beautifully captures the delicate transition from winter's starkness to spring's vibrant renewal, evoking a sense of longing and intimacy. The imagery of Winter's bark gloom and weed bite conjures a mood of desolation, yet it is juxtaposed with the arrival of Spring, depicted as a gentle force that breathes life into the landscape.
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Date: 3/30/2024 11:11:00 PM
Totally beautiful, Paifge, Thank you for sharing this with us. Pangie xx
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Date: 3/30/2024 11:00:00 PM
So amorously divine and soulful this is dear paige, i love the way you weave emotions always in such an intriguing manner leaving me thinking and admiring the way you use nature to paint your thoughts with exquisite metaphors and lines! A beautiful poem this is! Pleasure reading your work always: a fave for me! Sending you light! Hope easter went well.
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