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Spring Weathering

As the door's brass knob aches— Where winter season holders twist; A new bloom in her child's frame— Outside in my heart throb away. Where winter season holders twist, By the unquieted chime, Outside in my heart throb away— Spring is wrested out, by. By the unquieted chime, A new bloom in her child's frame; Spring is wrested out, by— As the door's brass knob aches.

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Date: 2/21/2024 8:05:00 AM
gentle and expectant, the cusp of transition through delicate refrain revealed
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Date: 2/21/2024 5:05:00 AM
Love the refrain!
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Date: 2/21/2024 3:40:00 AM
What a beautiful pantoum, the way your words flow is just seamless dear paige. I loved so many lines in this especially “ Where winter season holders twist, By the unquieted chime, Outside in my heart throb away—“ deeply moving and soulful and i can feel the depth of your words really! Pleasure reading your work. Sending you light always
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Date: 2/20/2024 10:47:00 PM
enjoyed the musical rythm and creativity, thanks poet
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Date: 2/20/2024 4:21:00 PM
well done, Paige! Loved the flow and the creativity. Have a splendid evening, Sara
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Date: 2/20/2024 3:54:00 PM
Cute one, Paige. I want to see if you entered 4 ,by 4 contest that just got judged
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Date: 2/20/2024 3:54:00 PM
Cute one, Paige. I want to see if you entered 4 ,by 4 contest that just got judged
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Paige Hind
Date: 2/20/2024 5:17:00 PM
Hey, Andrea. I didn't know there was a contest that lined up with this poem- I just wrote it because it just came to me. Thanks for your comments.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/20/2024 3:54:00 PM
Date: 2/20/2024 12:53:00 PM
Nicely done Paige.. nice selection of words and it flows so well...
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