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Spring Morning

Slowly the light comes into my eyes. The morning is here and that's no surprise. Thin lines of the sun's rays shine through. An open curtain from across my bedroom. My eyelids are heavy and feel so dry. Trying to wipe the long sleep from my eye. The tiniest particles of dust float softly from my bed. Splatter across thin lines of light just above my head. I wonder to myself, should I get up or just stay. The covers so warm and wishing to remain this way. The smell of fresh coffee is permeating the air. Who could it be making hot coffee out there? A bright new day has started for all of us, not just me. Come into my dream with me and see how great it can be.

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Shawna Horsley

Date: 1/5/2018 8:11:00 PM

Absolutly love it. I see picture the light shining through from across the room. I can just imagine the sent of coffee. I can relate I hate getting out of my warm bed in the mornings. thank you for sharing.

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 1/5/2018 3:51:00 PM

Wonderful write, Donald. Very vivid imagery. I can envision the dust particles in the sun's rays. Thank you for sharing your talent.

Niketa Mckenzie

Date: 1/5/2018 12:46:00 PM

this was awesome Donald i dont like getting up in he mornings either the bed is so comfortable

Vini Cho

Date: 1/5/2018 10:48:00 AM

Beautiful

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 4/21/2014 11:28:00 AM

Nice morning write Donald!

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 4/20/2014 1:59:00 AM

great morning atmosphere...we all go through this prolonged wish to drowse...nice reading today. SuZ

Ralph Sergi

Date: 11/15/2013 3:30:00 PM

Beautiful poem; especially the dust splattering across thin lines of air.Awesome!

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 4/12/2013 12:36:00 PM

Yeah, you penned it well... It is night by my watch here... What ticks yours? ~A.O

Donald Williams
Date: 4/12/2013 12:45:00 PM

mid afternoon here, but sun is peeking lol Nothing like eastern NC haha

Skat A

Date: 4/12/2013 11:05:00 AM

A nice way to start any morning~*~SKAT

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/12/2013 8:18:00 AM

Dropping by to say good morning. Have a great day. Do you prefer Don or Donald?

Donald Williams
Date: 4/12/2013 8:18:00 AM

Thank you for the coffee :) I love that lol

Christine Phillips

Date: 4/11/2013 2:31:00 PM

Thank you of reminding us that its spring. Not too hot...not too cold.

Donald Williams
Date: 4/12/2013 8:17:00 AM

My pleasure thank you for reading.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2013 10:50:00 AM

couldn't help and read this one again...xox Linda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2013 10:46:00 AM

enjoyed your couplet Donald... always' p.d.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/10/2013 9:42:00 AM

A sweet poem Donald, i like the way you debate with the warmness of the new feeling of spring in the air. I like the pearly rays of the sun playing on my eye lids. You seem to have woken up to a fine morning. Maybe a few steps towards the window pane to see and feel the difference. Perhaps that nice coffee pot waiting. Glad you words lead to a great feeling. always~ Linda

Donald Williams
Date: 4/12/2013 8:17:00 AM

Thank you so much PD you stopped by several times, glad you enjoyed this. :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/10/2013 8:35:00 AM

Very good Donald!

Donald Williams
Date: 4/12/2013 8:16:00 AM

Thanks Rick

Russell Sivey

Date: 4/10/2013 6:42:00 AM

This is a tremendous and intriguing write Donald! I am impressed with this delightful poem this afternoon! I have to know, who was making the coffee? What an amazing piece, Great Work!!

Donald Williams
Date: 4/10/2013 6:45:00 AM

That blessed person is left to the imagination of the reader. It leaves us with just enough information to fill in the blanks, Mother, father, brother, sister, girlfriend, boyfried, or whatever LOL Thank you so much for sharing your comment. Have a wonderful day.