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my feet hardly touch the earth I separate the hardness of the ground with the lightness of the flowers the task at hand is so free! I gather, walk amongst the flowers; taking them with me imbibing all that is delicate from each petal and leaf my clothes slip away from my skin; as shoulder is revealed, the breeze gently strokes as I run my fingers through swaying stems I am in a moment caught in the gaze of love the line of my neck and back seen through eyes that unequivocally adore a gaze that washes over me like the breeze bathing me in reflected beauty that transcends my own time, attention, colour and detail given and placed upon the wall so that I may see myself as you see me protected from the hardness of the ground by the softness of your brush strokes so I offer you thanks you are bemused by my gesture beauty lives here, in this moment and I am part of it Brian Strand Contest 3rd Place

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Date: 8/28/2023 4:02:00 AM
- A very lovely poem, D.D. :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs
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Date: 8/28/2023 10:48:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise, I'm pleased you liked it x
Date: 8/27/2023 12:12:00 PM
Oh, this is really lovely, Dilly Dally! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Date: 8/27/2023 1:34:00 PM
Thank you Janice, pleased you like it x
Date: 8/27/2023 12:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Sara
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Date: 8/27/2023 1:34:00 PM
Thanks Sara
Date: 8/27/2023 5:28:00 AM
Incredible. I love it. God bless you and Congrats. Love, Gina
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Date: 8/27/2023 1:36:00 PM
Thank you Gina - it was fun to write x

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