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April-1-2025

Spring Haiku Poetry Competition

Sponsor- Tania Kitchin

~ PLACED FIRST~

dandy butterfly
lands on bunch of spring flowers~
stamps the seal of love

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/9/2025 2:51:00 AM

Stamping the seal of love... A very beautiful image is brought out. Congratulations!

thriveni c mysore

Date: 4/7/2025 8:24:00 PM

stamp it is! lovely dear friend. Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/6/2025 10:34:00 AM

Love that marvelous last line. Big congrats

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/6/2025 10:10:00 AM

- Congratulations on your spring haiku, Valsa :) - hugs

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/6/2025 7:48:00 AM

This is terrific Valsa. "dandy" and "stamps" are so descriptive. Congratulations! :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/6/2025 7:04:00 AM

Valsa, a sweet and beautiful haiku, love the last line. Congratulations on your first place win.

Valsa George
Date: 4/6/2025 10:07:00 PM

Thanks a lot dear Tania for the first placement given and for your congratulations.

Michael Tor

Date: 4/2/2025 5:07:00 PM

Lovely Haiku Valsa such a welcoming Spring poem. A favorite for me, God bless you and hugs...

CayCay Jennings

Date: 4/2/2025 4:51:00 PM

I'm so blessed to have discovered you/your poetry. Lovely Haiku, felt the end line do its magic ... CayCay

Joe Dimino

Date: 4/2/2025 11:02:00 AM

Wonderful image -- we can learn much from nature...just be watching and listening with a Rhythmic-breath heart and mind. Blessings.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/2/2025 2:35:00 AM

Ahhh!! Aren't those butterflies beautiful, and I like that plant which looks like orange lantana, but it could be something else. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K

Yann Rolland

Date: 4/1/2025 7:27:00 PM

brilliant image, i love so much the "upcoming" ? spring thanks poet

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/1/2025 6:24:00 PM

Dear Valsa, this haiku has excellent syntax and provides an important reminder about "spring love." It catches the idea of fresh beginnings and the beauty of love by depicting a butterfly interacting with flowers. It represents the fragility and impermanence of love, as well as the joy that comes with it. The terms "dandy," "butterfly," and "flowers" convey a feeling of fun and innocence associated with spring and love.

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 4/1/2025 3:19:00 PM

Hello Valsa, beautiful picture and a great Haiku.