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Spring Is Not All

Oh, why must poets write as if the spring is so romantic when the flowers bloom? Why not more of summer or winter sing? Love’s season must be spring (most folks assume). Spring is not all. In fact, it’s mostly rain. Sometimes it rains and rains as if to steal the sun away, and that feels like a pain when I’ve grown ready for a little zeal! In summer I can swim inside the sea and relish sunshine longer into night while lying on a beach – my love with me. Now that’s romance the way to do it right, or even winter when there’s cold and snow, romance means cuddling by the fireplace glow. Feb. 12, 2023 For Michelle Faulkner's "Spring Is Not All' Poetry Contest

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Date: 3/3/2023 5:55:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your wonderful win. Have a great/blessed day......................
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Date: 3/3/2023 2:59:00 AM
"romance means cuddling by the fireplace glow" beautifully said. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/15/2023 1:33:00 PM
I would change Line 3. ~ 'Why not OF summer or of winter sing', disabusing one of the notion that poetry is seasonal. :)
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Robert Warlov
Date: 2/15/2023 7:25:00 PM
Rascality's a thing. Pity the poet bereft of Kings.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/15/2023 2:02:00 PM
I took your advice but in a little bit different way
Date: 2/13/2023 2:28:00 AM
Every season has its importance. I once read that a type of cactus seed would not grow unless it is frozen stiff. Best for a win
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Date: 2/12/2023 8:01:00 PM
I agree with most of the stuff you have said in this poem.
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Date: 2/12/2023 12:40:00 PM
Quite good sentiments Andrea, on other Seasons to enjoy...But I still like spring..' And I'm going to enjoy it..lol?))) Best of results with the contest (I cannot Find) hey this virtual lockdown stuff is rather Creepy..' Well it is..! I never heard it coming even.)
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Date: 2/12/2023 12:39:00 PM
Quite good sentiments Andrea, on other Seasons to enjoy...But I still like spring..' And I'm going to enjoy it..lol?))) Best of results with the contest (I cannot Find) hey this virtual lockdown stuff is rather Creepy..' Well it is..! I never heard it coming even.)
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Date: 2/12/2023 11:08:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for Michelle's contest to me. Some excellent thoughts penned about spring not being all. Thanks for sharing this and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 2/12/2023 10:40:00 AM
- Every season has its charm, Andrea ... but in any case spring is the most beautiful time ... and spring must come before summer is ready ... a great image of what the contest wants to have an image of ... good luck :) - hugs
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Date: 2/12/2023 10:17:00 AM
A lovely write. We need to tell the story everyday of the year. Have a blessed day writing away......................
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