Spring Dusk

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Written on April 28, 2024

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Still, cool colors, drifting on the spring skies, Dew kissed promises on the gentlest morns, Behind floods, bursts of pulsing blooms will rise, Even roses have their portion of thorns. Puffing crooning’s from the birds in soft song, Comforting souls with their crisp verse, their light. With His wilderness world, God is not wrong. Shelters with love that glistens through the night. Spring, in silence, reminds souls to believe, Winds kindle a desire to meet the new, Even though winter’s end will surely grieve, Spring brings joy that our spirits always knew. It is in spring, where we meet our intent. Under spring’s dying dusk, we’ll be content!

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/28/2024 4:49:00 PM

I enjoyed this uplifting poem with its springlike qualities. These lines set such a beautiful tone and scene: Still, cool colors, drifting on the spring skies, Dew kissed promises on the gentlest morns, Oh how you captured the evocative nature of spring! But the last two lines were my favorite--softly powerful and inspirational. Have a wonderful evening and feel better, hugs, Sara