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Spring Driving

What a silly nincompoop, hands free phony Driving over everything in his pathway His eyes fully occupied by the cute girl Gingerly bouncing! Sapphic Stanza number Three contest Sponsored by Craig Cornish.

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Date: 8/5/2015 3:29:00 PM
I think this is the first time I had every seen the word "nincompoop" in a poem! very cute :)
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Date: 5/2/2015 7:09:00 PM
A young one in Spring ALL of us watch, and remember when it was us! Light & Love
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/3/2015 7:48:00 AM
It doesn't feel like all that long ago. It's like time somehow tricks us.
Date: 4/29/2015 11:35:00 PM
Awesome one! Must have been funny to see, if this was a true story! Always, Laura
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/13/2015 4:01:00 PM
I imagine it is true almost every day during the early spring and summer.
Date: 4/24/2015 4:52:00 PM
I love this one! I guess 'nincompoop' is a foible of being human.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/13/2015 4:01:00 PM
true!
Date: 4/22/2015 8:32:00 AM
- Love this one ... Richard :) - Hope it does happiness in the contest !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/22/2015 9:19:00 AM
Thanks Anne Lise.
Date: 4/14/2015 10:59:00 PM
Once upon a time, in a galaxy, far far away. I was a nincompoop. Several times. I didn't think anyone knew...........A 7 for creativity, Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/15/2015 8:00:00 AM
Ha ha, thanks.
Date: 4/14/2015 6:28:00 PM
this is REALLY cute, Richard. Good luck in the contest. This one was unique!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/14/2015 7:58:00 PM
Thanks Andrea.
Date: 4/13/2015 10:32:00 PM
LOL but seriously, How is your drive axle?
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/14/2015 8:53:00 AM
The axle is fine but the piston is a bit bruised!
Date: 4/13/2015 4:13:00 PM
Was this you? ....lol..It does happen
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/14/2015 8:51:00 AM
Nope, I am good at multi tasking.
Date: 4/13/2015 9:49:00 AM
I have a blog up, Richard. You told me to let you know when I do....Hugs.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/13/2015 1:41:00 PM
Hugs back to you Eileen!
Date: 4/13/2015 9:09:00 AM
Richard is being naughty....Good one! Good luck in Craig's contest with this write. I'll always read and comment on your work...even if I'm on Mars. Hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/13/2015 9:45:00 AM
Thanks Eileen, I thought I would take a different approach to spring.
Date: 4/13/2015 8:39:00 AM
ha ha ha - you see it so often Richard - distracted by a pretty girl:-) Hugs jan xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/13/2015 8:53:00 AM
And all the men and women are enjoying the view - our postmen start to wear their shorts in spring lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/13/2015 8:48:00 AM
A sure sign of spring is all the pretty girls enjoying the freedom of the season.