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awakened by light
          heralding its renewal
               a soft petal purrs...
                    
                    C.W.S.
                03/14/2020

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Line Gauthier

Date: 1/25/2021 6:06:00 PM

How charming... "a soft petal purrs" ~ I love that line, it's so true that the softness of a petal is magical. It's lovely to find this lovely brevity published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~

Charlie Smith
Date: 1/29/2021 8:12:00 AM

Thank you Line...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2020 7:55:00 PM

seeing this one again I think, it's just so lovely!

Charlie Smith
Date: 5/12/2020 2:53:00 PM

Thanks again Andrea...

Joan C. Fingon

Date: 4/24/2020 5:59:00 PM

Love the picture with the poem nice compliment

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/25/2020 11:36:00 AM

Thank you Joan...

Anisha Dutta

Date: 4/2/2020 12:05:00 AM

Nicely penned. I admire. Best Wishes.

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/2/2020 12:35:00 PM

Thank you Anisha...

Panagiota Romios

Date: 4/1/2020 9:29:00 PM

Excellent Haiku. A petal purrs awesome Panagiota xx

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/2/2020 12:35:00 PM

Thank you Panagiota...

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/28/2020 10:51:00 AM

Love your poem and picture. This Spring I will listen close to hear the purr from my flowers. Enjoy your day........

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/28/2020 10:54:00 AM

Thanks Paula...

Bryan Norton

Date: 3/25/2020 12:50:00 AM

Simple truths Hidden by lack of reason Waiting to be born . . . Thank you for a beautiful verse.

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/26/2020 6:47:00 AM

Thank You Bryan...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/24/2020 2:49:00 PM

How marvelous dear, Charlie! Excellent Haiku

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/26/2020 6:47:00 AM

Thanks Demetrios...

Heidi Sands

Date: 3/24/2020 9:58:00 AM

So beautiful Charlie. Lovely to read today :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/24/2020 11:54:00 AM

Thank you Heidi...

M. L. Kiser

Date: 3/23/2020 6:02:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku!

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/24/2020 11:53:00 AM

Thanks M.L.

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 3/22/2020 3:19:00 PM

Charlie, Dickinson's image is a photograph discovered in the 50's, I believe. It's one of only two extant of her. Google it for more information. Thanks for the stop by.est to you as always. / M

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/22/2020 3:44:00 PM

Thanks Maurice...

Constance La France

Date: 3/21/2020 11:31:00 AM

Charlie, your poem is lovely and your image is sublime _Constance

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/21/2020 12:22:00 PM

Thank you Constance...

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 3/21/2020 10:47:00 AM

This is a poetically perfect description of a Sringtime event in the flower world. Spring is in the air, and summer hot on its heels. I love your last few words Charlie. Blessings, Jenny.

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/21/2020 12:21:00 PM

Thanks Jennifer...

Anil Deo

Date: 3/21/2020 1:12:00 AM

just love all the meanings in line 1,"awakened by light." thanx Charlie. shalom shalom in the PRINCE of peace

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/21/2020 12:18:00 PM

Thanks Anil...

Vladislav Raven

Date: 3/20/2020 6:38:00 PM

Hi Charlie, I always love a well written Haiku and this is just that. I love the content of this write Charlie. It is a definite fav. Your friend always....Mike. I love the Haiku, I love the spring.

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/21/2020 12:17:00 PM

Thanks Mike...