Spring Days

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~Spring Days~ (Double Tanka) Spring is beautiful Trees happily come alive Flowers again bloom Butterfly, hummingbirds fly Spring is a sight to behold The skies seem bluer Days now are more beautiful Your face only glows With happiness in the sun And in your eyes just joy shows. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 December.17.2015

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/18/2015 9:02:00 AM

oh my, spring is in your soul even with it still in December. I enjoyed this one with its many beautiful pictures. some of your pics are by the same artist I wrote of in the favorite painter contest!!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 12/20/2015 7:27:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Andrea,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very much I appreciate it.Yes, it brings warmth to the heart especially now and the beautiful images you're referring to, are paintings by Thomas Kinkaid:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always! And very Merry Christmas to you and Happy New Year!:)!D