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Spring Dance

Spring's tiny fluttering visitors ~ Bring along magic and whimsy.
tiny hummingbirds
tango while sipping nectar ~
delightful dancers
Tiny Hummingbirds appear fluttering at the feeder,
wings in iridescent green, flapping to be the leader.
Whirling, zipping and zooming their whimsical dance,
a magical moment to watch, if you get the chance!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 6/3/2023 6:33:00 AM
Tania, your composition is exquisitely crafted. I aspire to create something of equal merit, but I am still in the process of honing my skills. Thanks for your uplifting comment on my poem.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/3/2023 3:17:00 PM
Lasaad, thank you and you're welcome.
Date: 6/2/2023 12:55:00 PM
Beautifully composed, Tania:-) Hopefully, I can come up with something as worthy.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/2/2023 1:14:00 PM
Ed, thank you and I'm sure you will.
Date: 5/29/2023 6:31:00 PM
This is super sweet, Tania. Love it
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/30/2023 3:12:00 AM
Andrea, thank you.
Date: 5/29/2023 1:20:00 PM
Nice penning Tania, love your wording with a great line of thought too. Blessings, Gordon
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/29/2023 2:03:00 PM
Gordon, thank you.
Date: 5/29/2023 6:26:00 AM
what a charming string poem poems Tania. I would love to see hummingbirds for real one day. I will try and write for your new contest, i love the idea:-) hugs Jan xx
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/29/2023 11:43:00 AM
Jan, thank you, hugs.
Date: 5/29/2023 2:06:00 AM
Wonderful composition using three different types of poems.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/29/2023 5:03:00 AM
Victor, thank you, I wrote it as an example for my contest.
Date: 5/29/2023 12:18:00 AM
Beautiful set of poems, Tania:)
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/29/2023 5:03:00 AM
Joanna, thank you.
Date: 5/28/2023 10:40:00 PM
Enjoyed your composition. Trying your contest. Love.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/29/2023 5:03:00 AM
Anisha, thank you.
Date: 5/28/2023 4:00:00 PM
They truly are mesmerizing to watch, and beautifully colored. I love the way you describe them as if they're dancing.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 5/28/2023 5:12:00 PM
Lin, thank you.

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