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Spring Daffodils

Oh! Behold The bliss and beauty of spring The warm sunbeams, the sudden showers, The husky wind, neither swift nor soft The verdure of shrubs that puts forth their buds And their sweet fragrance When opening their delicate folds. Lo! That cluster of daffodils over the hedge, The brightest flowers of early spring Popping out of the hard crust of the earth Announcing that spring is at our doorstep With yellow crowns, they are regal heirs Poised on green stems amid long slender leaves Seen in gregarious groups, never as loners Sometimes stretch for miles, offering a visual treat As the dappled sunlight filters through the clouds They swing and dance in merriment in the hazy light Amid a circling layer of petals, each flower holds a cup A wine filled goblet, for bees and butterflies to sip As if they are blooming to feed those winged fairies Each leaf, each bloom and each blade of grass Of the verdant spring assures us of fresh beginnings But nothing can so delight us like the daffodils That used to haunt and tickle the fancy Of the great English bard of Cockermouth Whenever he sat sad or in pensive mood
Placed Second March.7. 2022 Spring Showers or Spring Flowers Poetry Contest Sponsor- Regina MacIntosh

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Date: 3/24/2022 1:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Valsa! Daffodils now have a new, and glorious, meaning for me. You have captured, and distilled, the essence of spring into a perfume of beauty through the daffodil. Amazing verse. So well done. This is joy on a stem!
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Date: 3/18/2022 8:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Spring Daffodils" is a lovely write. As a child we had a long driveway lined with these flowers. It was so pretty to come home to. Have a great/blessed day.......................
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Date: 3/18/2022 2:52:00 AM
How lovely this is Valsa. “ A wine filled goblet, for bees and butterflies to sip As if they are blooming to feed those winged fairies” your creative pen shines in this wonderful poem my friend. Congratulations on your Second Place win. Blessings xxoo
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Date: 3/17/2022 9:25:00 PM
Great work on the beautiful daffodils. "The warm sunbeams, the sudden showers" - Description flows flawless. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/17/2022 4:53:00 PM
Congratulations dear friend. You captured the amarantine beauty of a spring bloom that warms the heart after a long winter. So lovely!
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Date: 3/17/2022 11:13:00 AM
Beautifully done. A inspiration and a sunny smile all at once. I love it. Congrats on your high placement. God bless you with many more beautiful writes. Love, Gina
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Date: 3/17/2022 7:23:00 PM
Thank you so much Gina ! Glad you picked up this poem for a win , also for organizing this premier contest ! Stay blessed ! :)
Date: 3/17/2022 11:00:00 AM
Congratulations, Valsa, On your win my friend. Outstanding write. Blessings ~ Debra
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Date: 3/14/2022 8:33:00 PM
Hello Valsa ... when we see daffodil flowers, we know the bright yellow blooms are telling us winter is almost behind us - thanks again Valsa - Lindsay
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Date: 3/7/2022 12:12:00 PM
Nice piece Valsa, with great imagery and insightfulness making it a reminder of spring around the corner. Have a great day, Gordon
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Date: 3/7/2022 10:58:00 AM
Your imagery is terrifically penned "They swing and dance in merriment in the hazy light Amid a circling layer of petals, each flower holds a cup A wine filled goblet, for bees and butterflies to sip" Wow Valsa. Wow!
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Date: 3/7/2022 9:42:00 AM
Lovely writing filled with glorious spring imagery, Valsa. Nice!
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Date: 3/7/2022 7:17:00 AM
The daffodils are blooming well here Valsa, spring is coming. Tom
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Date: 3/7/2022 6:24:00 AM
This poem is a visual treat. So much imagery and and beautiful descriptions. Best for a win.
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Date: 3/7/2022 5:52:00 AM
Beautifully written Valsa. I enjoyed :)
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Date: 3/7/2022 5:42:00 AM
A wonderful depiction, Valsa. Much enjoyed this ode to daffodils. Joy of spring emanates throughout this lovely poem. Win BIG!
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Date: 3/7/2022 3:03:00 AM
Oh, the beauty of spring perfectly captured! Your pen is an oasis of sublime expressions dear friend. Excellently penned. Best wishes on sure win!
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