Spring Daffodils

Oh! Behold The bliss and beauty of spring The warm sunbeams, the sudden showers, The husky wind, neither swift nor soft The verdure of shrubs that puts forth their buds And their sweet fragrance When opening their delicate folds. Lo! That cluster of daffodils over the hedge, The brightest flowers of early spring Popping out of the hard crust of the earth Announcing that spring is at our doorstep With yellow crowns, they are regal heirs Poised on green stems amid long slender leaves Seen in gregarious groups, never as loners Sometimes stretch for miles, offering a visual treat As the dappled sunlight filters through the clouds They swing and dance in merriment in the hazy light Amid a circling layer of petals, each flower holds a cup A wine filled goblet, for bees and butterflies to sip As if they are blooming to feed those winged fairies Each leaf, each bloom and each blade of grass Of the verdant spring assures us of fresh beginnings But nothing can so delight us like the daffodils That used to haunt and tickle the fancy Of the great English bard of Cockermouth Whenever he sat sad or in pensive mood
Placed Second March.7. 2022 Spring Showers or Spring Flowers Poetry Contest Sponsor- Regina MacIntosh
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Kauffman Avatar
March 24, 2022 at 1:01 PM
Congratulations on your win Valsa! Daffodils now have a new, and glorious, meaning for me. You have captured, and distilled, the essence of spring into a perfume of beauty through the daffodil. Amazing verse. So well done. This is joy on a stem!
Goldsmith Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 8:41 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Spring Daffodils" is a lovely write. As a child we had a long driveway lined with these flowers. It was so pretty to come home to. Have a great/blessed day.......................
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 18, 2022 at 2:52 AM
How lovely this is Valsa. “ A wine filled goblet, for bees and butterflies to sip As if they are blooming to feed those winged fairies” your creative pen shines in this wonderful poem my friend. Congratulations on your Second Place win. Blessings xxoo
Alex Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 9:25 PM
Great work on the beautiful daffodils. "The warm sunbeams, the sudden showers" - Description flows flawless. Congratulations!
Brul Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 4:53 PM
Congratulations dear friend. You captured the amarantine beauty of a spring bloom that warms the heart after a long winter. So lovely!
Mcintosh Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 11:13 AM
Beautifully done. A inspiration and a sunny smile all at once. I love it. Congrats on your high placement. God bless you with many more beautiful writes. Love, Gina
George Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 7:23 PM
Thank you so much Gina ! Glad you picked up this poem for a win , also for organizing this premier contest ! Stay blessed ! :)
Brown Avatar
March 17, 2022 at 11:00 AM
Congratulations, Valsa, On your win my friend. Outstanding write. Blessings ~ Debra
Laurie Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 8:33 PM
Hello Valsa ... when we see daffodil flowers, we know the bright yellow blooms are telling us winter is almost behind us - thanks again Valsa - Lindsay
Mcconnell Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 12:12 PM
Nice piece Valsa, with great imagery and insightfulness making it a reminder of spring around the corner. Have a great day, Gordon
Krutsinger Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 10:58 AM
Your imagery is terrifically penned "They swing and dance in merriment in the hazy light Amid a circling layer of petals, each flower holds a cup A wine filled goblet, for bees and butterflies to sip" Wow Valsa. Wow!
Hankins Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 9:42 AM
Lovely writing filled with glorious spring imagery, Valsa. Nice!
Cunningham Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 7:17 AM
The daffodils are blooming well here Valsa, spring is coming. Tom
Buhagiar Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 6:24 AM
This poem is a visual treat. So much imagery and and beautiful descriptions. Best for a win.
Sands Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 5:52 AM
Beautifully written Valsa. I enjoyed :)
Pandit Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 5:42 AM
A wonderful depiction, Valsa. Much enjoyed this ode to daffodils. Joy of spring emanates throughout this lovely poem. Win BIG!
Brul Avatar
March 7, 2022 at 3:03 AM
Oh, the beauty of spring perfectly captured! Your pen is an oasis of sublime expressions dear friend. Excellently penned. Best wishes on sure win!
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