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Poetry/Haiku/spring birds
Copyright Protected, ID 03-1720-627-30
All Rights Reserved, 2025, Constance La France
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Written, March 30, 2025
For the International Contest, Spring Haiku
Sponsor, Tania Kitchen, Judged 04/06/2025

FIRST PLACE

Baby birds are often so ugly they're cute. I love watching them transition  from thin-skinned, mostly featherless scrawny little things into healthy  birds all ready to fly. There's something beautiful about an

in the spring forest four wispy baby birds peep ~ the silence listens

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Date: 4/9/2025 2:45:00 AM
A very beautiful scene is illustrated. Congratulations!
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Date: 4/9/2025 5:30:00 AM
Chris, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, blessings ~
Date: 4/7/2025 8:21:00 PM
silence listens! Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Constance La France
Date: 4/8/2025 8:32:00 AM
thriveni, thank you so much for the congratulations, blessings ~
Date: 4/6/2025 10:28:00 AM
Oh this is so nice. Thae last line is fabulous, Constance. Congrats
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Date: 4/6/2025 6:49:00 PM
Andrea, thank you for the compliment, comment and congrats, blessings ~
Date: 4/6/2025 10:13:00 AM
- Congratulations on your spring haiku, Constance :) - hugs
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Date: 4/6/2025 6:49:00 PM
Ann-Lise, thank you so much for the congratulations, hugs and blessings ~
Date: 4/6/2025 7:41:00 AM
Softly sweet Constance. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 4/6/2025 6:50:00 PM
Linda, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, blessings ~
Date: 4/6/2025 6:56:00 AM
Constance, a sweet poem, love the baby bird imagery in the forest. Congratulations on your first place win.
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Constance La France
Date: 4/6/2025 6:51:00 PM
Tania, thank your for the contest and my wonderful placement, and the complimet, and congratulations, blessings ~
Date: 3/30/2025 9:43:00 PM
Beautiful haiku, Constance. I love this sight. The fledglings are always hungry and they are always seen gape mouthed !
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Date: 4/2/2025 8:55:00 AM
Valsa, thank you for the compliment, and comment, lol yes always with the open mouths waiting, blessings ~
Date: 3/30/2025 4:40:00 PM
Very nice! Good luck :-) a calm cozy nest in a beautiful springtime the birds sing cool songs
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Constance La France
Date: 4/2/2025 8:57:00 AM
AA, thank you for the compliment, encouragement, and comment, that is the lovely part of Spring all the new babies of all kinds, blessings ~

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