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Spring Bird

It’s a strange place for me - In my sixty-fifth spring, I find I’m up a tree, And I don’t know a thing. I’ve always got it wrong. Little birdy in my tree, Teach me with your song. So grateful I would be. “Tweet”, the birdy smiled. “I’ll teach you my child.”

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Date: 4/24/2024 1:44:00 PM
I can relate to your words, David. Seems like the older I get the less I seem to know and understand...A certain depth to your words that I appreciate. have a great afternoon, Sara
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David Crandall
Date: 4/24/2024 5:32:00 PM
Maybe we're old enough to know all the things we don't know lol
Date: 4/24/2024 7:46:00 AM
David, a delightful poem, Constance
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Date: 4/24/2024 8:36:00 AM
Thanks Constance! Glad you liked it.
Date: 4/24/2024 6:16:00 AM
Dear David, you have wonderfully encapsulated the uncertainty and humility that often accompany new experiences later in life. I loved the imagery of finding oneself up a tree in the sixty-fifth spring, reflecting the feeling of being in unfamiliar territory despite years of living. Your openness to learning and willingness to embrace nature's teachings exemplify a profound humility and openness to growth. Sometimes, the most exciting lessons come from minor and unexpected sources. - Blessings, Daniel
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David Crandall
Date: 4/24/2024 8:35:00 AM
Thanks Daniel! I appreciate your comments, especially since this is one of mine that I'm happiest with.
Date: 4/24/2024 12:10:00 AM
adorable and beautiful one, so well woven: sometimes despite our age etc theres so much left unknown, if only those tweets would enlighten us all. Pleasure reading this deep and well woven write
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David Crandall
Date: 4/24/2024 8:34:00 AM
Thanks Ink Empress. It's so nice to hear those words. Sometimes the simplest things, go unnoticed under our noses.

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